My landing page for dating niche

Mahmoud Selman · 07-17-2011, 04:53 PM

Hello Warriors,
I would like to share with you my landing page for dating niche and to give an idea to newbies how a landing page looks like and to hear your thoughts and advice on this.
I have used this landing page with PPC advertising and I got some good results with it, and now I will try to improve it with SEO.
Some may find it awesome and some may find it complicated

The main reason with it is to make it work as a filter since the traffic I was getting from second tier PPC networks wasn't too good geo-targeted.
The site have 2 doors, an opt-in door and the 2nd will take you directly inside the site with the flags at the bottom.

Please share your thoughts and ideas, All comments are welcome.
Landing Page Free online dating service for singles

Omid · 07-17-2011, 06:17 PM

Good Lander Mahmoud. I have some points for you to increase the CR of your opt-in form.

I'd use some amateur looking girls. I have been promote dating offers on POF and always amateur images work better for me! That professional model seems "too good to be true" to your visitors. You know what I'm saying?

Also, instead of "your town" use a geo-targing script. I use "geoPlugin to geolocate your visitors" and it works like a charm! If you have any problem setting up the code just drop me a line and I will help you out.

Instead of "dating offers in your area" use "Looking for someone to date in [town]?" and replace [town] with the geo-targeting script I gave you. Always approach the visitor with a question or a challenge!

Make sure to have a image button saying "Get the List for FREE" or "Subscribe for FREE" instead of current "Submit button".

Above are only my opinions. Make sure to hear others' advises.

~ Omid

Mahmoud Selman · 07-17-2011, 06:58 PM

Hi Omid,
Thank you for the nice tips and for the geo-plugin. I have implemented the plugin and it works.

jeffrey73 · 07-17-2011, 08:00 PM

Awesome looking lander! Now just work more on your ad-copy.

"Fill your information to get a list of our great offers" is not very compelling.

I'm looking at this thinking "What's in it for me?" . It sounds like you just want my name and email so you can mail me offers.

Instead try to give away a free gift or something like: "7 Surefire Dating Tips to Get Her Into Bed Tonight!"

Simply signing up just to get receive your dating offers isn't very motivating for the end user. Make sense?

imback · 07-17-2011, 08:49 PM

Looks great like Jeffery said work on your ad copy and be sure to test different pictures and headlines

CHAD

JasonWestwick · 07-18-2011, 06:28 AM

Good work Mahmoud, the plugin works a treat.

As other have suggested expeiment with different images and copy to find what converts.

Just my own opinion but I was immediately pulled to your main image of the girl in lingerie (typical guy huh??

) so scrolled down to see more and then noticed the 7 surefire tips headline and opt in box.

I then scrolled back to the top and was slightly confused at your approach, in the header you are promoting a dating Masterclass and the best website for true love, with an image of a happy couple. Underneath that you are promoting a free report on how to get a woman into bed.

These are 2 completely different types of demographics that you are looking to target on one page and in the end the message gets confused and the images contradict each other, either you're teaching guys "hidden secrets" on how to get women into bed or you are playing matchmaker and promising your viewer true love. Pick a direction and go with it completely, at the moment it looks a bit muddled and confusing.

Hope that helps.

Mahmoud Selman · 07-18-2011, 12:04 PM

Thank you guys for your great ideas. I have set all to action and edited the site. Any more ideas please!

elcorillord · 07-18-2011, 12:53 PM

Nice landing page.. but something that Omid said.. Is good to use that script.. to target places/city..etc.. but don't promote it on Adwords cause I tried..but it seems they dont like dynamic "content"

Trevor · 07-18-2011, 01:01 PM

I think the girl in the background is really hot, but that probably doesn't answer your question.

Anyway, I think the LP looks good, the design is clear, maybe only the call to action line should be a little bigger.

Trevor

Mahmoud Selman · 07-18-2011, 02:12 PM

Looks way better now with some changes, I have also included a PDF file with some tips for great first date. Flags been removed and added another call to action. Keep it coming warriors. How about adding an article to the welcome page?

elcorillord · 07-18-2011, 02:23 PM

I like the changes.. and the second call to action its good.. how you plan to promote them? Facebook?

and yes you can add an article..but it seems that with dating sites..you don't really need them.

jeffrey73 · 07-18-2011, 02:51 PM

I agree with Jason. The girl in lingerie doesn't really call out "true love", but more of sex.

I think you should stick to one "theme" and use appropriate photos. Otherwise it's just confusing to what your offer is about.

Maybe change your header to a more sexual couple, and get rid of the "true love" slogan.

Quote:

Originally Posted by JasonWestwick

Good work Mahmoud, the plugin works a treat.

As other have suggested expeiment with different images and copy to find what converts.

Just my own opinion but I was immediately pulled to your main image of the girl in lingerie (typical guy huh??

) so scrolled down to see more and then noticed the 7 surefire tips headline and opt in box.

I then scrolled back to the top and was slightly confused at your approach, in the header you are promoting a dating Masterclass and the best website for true love, with an image of a happy couple. Underneath that you are promoting a free report on how to get a woman into bed.

These are 2 completely different types of demographics that you are looking to target on one page and in the end the message gets confused and the images contradict each other, either you're teaching guys "hidden secrets" on how to get women into bed or you are playing matchmaker and promising your viewer true love. Pick a direction and go with it completely, at the moment it looks a bit muddled and confusing.

Hope that helps.

Mahmoud Selman · 07-19-2011, 11:56 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by elcorillord

I like the changes.. and the second call to action its good.. how you plan to promote them? Facebook?

and yes you can add an article..but it seems that with dating sites..you don't really need them.

Thank you, I was promoting this LP with PPC and now I am trying SEO with article marketing.

sicnarf · 07-19-2011, 01:39 PM

I'd take a look at the web page except our IT department tracks everything that passes through the firewall and I don't want them to see me looking at dating sites. LOL. I'll check it out when I get home.

Mahmoud Selman · 07-20-2011, 02:08 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by sicnarf

I'd take a look at the web page except our IT department tracks everything that passes through the firewall and I don't want them to see me looking at dating sites. LOL. I'll check it out when I get home.

Thank you!

JasonWestwick · 07-20-2011, 03:15 PM

Mahmoud,
Awesome work and big congratulations, you've listened to and acknowledged all the advice given on here and continually re-assessed your page and made suitable modifications, it takes balls to put yourself and your campaigns out there like this and your willingness to learn has certainly paid off.

The page is now looking SOLID! The message is clear and concise and the images/header/copy all link together extremely well. I'm sure through testing you will find additional elements to change and play around with but your new page is significantly better than it was a few days ago.

Well done.

Mahmoud Selman · 07-20-2011, 03:29 PM

Thank you Jason! With your help and other warriors advice the site now going in the right direction. That kind of people what makes this forum an awesome place with a great value.

Mahmoud Selman · 07-26-2011, 06:34 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by kahmed09

Dont you think these kinda pages are dead now? they dont really work in modern day internet. people dont trust it.

What are you exactly talking about ? Dating websites, html websites, CPA is dead or what?

Smalt · 09-06-2011, 04:40 AM

Hey man,how is this working for you now?

How much do you make daily?

AdBank · 09-06-2011, 05:19 PM

Where were you running ppc to this google adwords? Facebook?

07-17-2011, 04:53 PM	#1
Mahmoud Selman Selman.us War Room Member Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: Sweden Posts: 822 Thanks: 317 Thanked 273 Times in 174 Posts Social Networking	My landing page for dating niche Hello Warriors, I would like to share with you my landing page for dating niche and to give an idea to newbies how a landing page looks like and to hear your thoughts and advice on this. I have used this landing page with PPC advertising and I got some good results with it, and now I will try to improve it with SEO. Some may find it awesome and some may find it complicated The main reason with it is to make it work as a filter since the traffic I was getting from second tier PPC networks wasn't too good geo-targeted. The site have 2 doors, an opt-in door and the 2nd will take you directly inside the site with the flags at the bottom. Please share your thoughts and ideas, All comments are welcome. Landing Page Free online dating service for singles
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07-17-2011, 06:17 PM	#2
Omid Experienced Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Mar 2011 Location: USA Posts: 552 Thanks: 24 Thanked 187 Times in 102 Posts Contact Info	Re: "The Secret" Revealed Good Lander Mahmoud. I have some points for you to increase the CR of your opt-in form. I'd use some amateur looking girls. I have been promote dating offers on POF and always amateur images work better for me! That professional model seems "too good to be true" to your visitors. You know what I'm saying? Also, instead of "your town" use a geo-targing script. I use "geoPlugin to geolocate your visitors" and it works like a charm! If you have any problem setting up the code just drop me a line and I will help you out. Instead of "dating offers in your area" use "Looking for someone to date in [town]?" and replace [town] with the geo-targeting script I gave you. Always approach the visitor with a question or a challenge! Make sure to have a image button saying "Get the List for FREE" or "Subscribe for FREE" instead of current "Submit button". Above are only my opinions. Make sure to hear others' advises. ~ Omid
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07-17-2011, 06:58 PM	#3
Mahmoud Selman Selman.us War Room Member Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: Sweden Posts: 822 Thanks: 317 Thanked 273 Times in 174 Posts Social Networking	Re: "The Secret" Revealed Hi Omid, Thank you for the nice tips and for the geo-plugin. I have implemented the plugin and it works.
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07-17-2011, 08:00 PM	#4
jeffrey73 AdCopyAssault.com War Room Member Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: USA Posts: 2,073 Thanks: 1,249 Thanked 450 Times in 374 Posts	Re: "The Secret" Revealed Awesome looking lander! Now just work more on your ad-copy. "Fill your information to get a list of our great offers" is not very compelling. I'm looking at this thinking "What's in it for me?" . It sounds like you just want my name and email so you can mail me offers. Instead try to give away a free gift or something like: "7 Surefire Dating Tips to Get Her Into Bed Tonight!" Simply signing up just to get receive your dating offers isn't very motivating for the end user. Make sense?
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07-17-2011, 08:49 PM	#5
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07-18-2011, 06:28 AM	#6
JasonWestwick Advanced Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 602 Thanks: 158 Thanked 233 Times in 148 Posts	Re: "The Secret" Revealed Good work Mahmoud, the plugin works a treat. As other have suggested expeiment with different images and copy to find what converts. Just my own opinion but I was immediately pulled to your main image of the girl in lingerie (typical guy huh?? ) so scrolled down to see more and then noticed the 7 surefire tips headline and opt in box. I then scrolled back to the top and was slightly confused at your approach, in the header you are promoting a dating Masterclass and the best website for true love, with an image of a happy couple. Underneath that you are promoting a free report on how to get a woman into bed. These are 2 completely different types of demographics that you are looking to target on one page and in the end the message gets confused and the images contradict each other, either you're teaching guys "hidden secrets" on how to get women into bed or you are playing matchmaker and promising your viewer true love. Pick a direction and go with it completely, at the moment it looks a bit muddled and confusing. Hope that helps.
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07-18-2011, 12:04 PM	#7
Mahmoud Selman Selman.us War Room Member Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: Sweden Posts: 822 Thanks: 317 Thanked 273 Times in 174 Posts Social Networking	Re: "The Secret" Revealed Thank you guys for your great ideas. I have set all to action and edited the site. Any more ideas please!
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07-18-2011, 12:53 PM	#8
elcorillord Active Warrior Join Date: Mar 2011 Posts: 44 Thanks: 0 Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts	Re: "The Secret" Revealed Nice landing page.. but something that Omid said.. Is good to use that script.. to target places/city..etc.. but don't promote it on Adwords cause I tried..but it seems they dont like dynamic "content"

07-18-2011, 01:01 PM	#9
Trevor Stay True To Yourself War Room Member Join Date: Jul 2010 Location: Does It Matter? You Can Work Everywhere! Posts: 666 Blog Entries: 2 Thanks: 79 Thanked 187 Times in 110 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Re: "The Secret" Revealed I think the girl in the background is really hot, but that probably doesn't answer your question. Anyway, I think the LP looks good, the design is clear, maybe only the call to action line should be a little bigger. Trevor

07-18-2011, 02:12 PM	#10
Mahmoud Selman Selman.us War Room Member Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: Sweden Posts: 822 Thanks: 317 Thanked 273 Times in 174 Posts Social Networking	Re: "The Secret" Revealed Looks way better now with some changes, I have also included a PDF file with some tips for great first date. Flags been removed and added another call to action. Keep it coming warriors. How about adding an article to the welcome page?
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07-18-2011, 02:23 PM	#11
elcorillord Active Warrior Join Date: Mar 2011 Posts: 44 Thanks: 0 Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts	Re: "The Secret" Revealed I like the changes.. and the second call to action its good.. how you plan to promote them? Facebook? and yes you can add an article..but it seems that with dating sites..you don't really need them.

07-19-2011, 01:39 PM	#14
sicnarf Active Warrior Join Date: Jul 2011 Location: Utah Posts: 97 Thanks: 15 Thanked 11 Times in 11 Posts	Re: "The Secret" Revealed I'd take a look at the web page except our IT department tracks everything that passes through the firewall and I don't want them to see me looking at dating sites. LOL. I'll check it out when I get home.

07-20-2011, 03:15 PM	#16
JasonWestwick Advanced Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Nov 2010 Posts: 602 Thanks: 158 Thanked 233 Times in 148 Posts	Re: My landing page for dating niche Mahmoud, Awesome work and big congratulations, you've listened to and acknowledged all the advice given on here and continually re-assessed your page and made suitable modifications, it takes balls to put yourself and your campaigns out there like this and your willingness to learn has certainly paid off. The page is now looking SOLID! The message is clear and concise and the images/header/copy all link together extremely well. I'm sure through testing you will find additional elements to change and play around with but your new page is significantly better than it was a few days ago. Well done.
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07-20-2011, 03:29 PM	#17
Mahmoud Selman Selman.us War Room Member Join Date: Apr 2011 Location: Sweden Posts: 822 Thanks: 317 Thanked 273 Times in 174 Posts Social Networking	Re: My landing page for dating niche Thank you Jason! With your help and other warriors advice the site now going in the right direction. That kind of people what makes this forum an awesome place with a great value.
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09-06-2011, 04:40 AM	#19
Smalt HQ Programmer Join Date: May 2011 Posts: 50 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts Contact Info	Re: My landing page for dating niche Hey man,how is this working for you now? How much do you make daily?
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09-06-2011, 05:19 PM	#20
AdBank Active Warrior Join Date: Jul 2011 Posts: 60 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts Contact Info	Re: My landing page for dating niche Where were you running ppc to this google adwords? Facebook?