Did u find that spelling out what to do on email submit offers to traffic boosted sales?

Blink · 08-03-2011, 04:32 PM

The title pretty much says it all. I had 52 clicks today but only 2 submits, just want to figure out how to improve this ratio.

Thanks :]

Blink

jeffrey73 · 08-03-2011, 05:11 PM

What does your ad look like?

Blink · 08-03-2011, 06:28 PM

hey jeff,

my site is here -> riha--ailluminati.com (replace -'s with n's)

ive only had the site for 1 day so havent really had time to do much to it. What would you recommend me to do to increase offer completion rate?

Cheers.

jeffrey73 · 08-03-2011, 09:47 PM

No, I meant your PPC ad you are using to drive the traffic.

As far as your lander goes, not bad. You did put Rihanna's picture under the fold, so you could probably make the design better. Possibly get rid of the header banner as I don't think it's necessary.

Some possible reasons your offer is not converting well could be:

- You say win a "free gift" but not WHAT the free gift actually is

- You aren't targeting the right crowd

- This "Illuminati" thing is becoming over-played and therefore is becoming too saturated. Try a different traffic source if you are using YouTube

- People have seen the Win a Free I-Pad offer too much on the traffic source, so you will have to be more creative with your campaign.

imback · 08-03-2011, 10:33 PM

Follow Jeff's advice pretty solid stuff there....like he said try testing different traffic sources and ad variations.

CHAD

Blink · 08-04-2011, 06:35 AM

to be honest the only way I drove traffic yesterday (the only day ive had the website so far xD) was by commenting on videos on youtube.

I'll take your suggestions on board and see what I can do with that :].

Blink · 08-07-2011, 08:59 AM

ive changed around quite a few things on the site, could someone give me some feedback please and also I would like to know if going for a download/install offer rather than email submit offer works out better for a site like mine? just wondering.

Thanks

08-03-2011, 04:32 PM	#1
Blink Active Warrior Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: Oxford, England. Posts: 52 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Did u find that spelling out what to do on email submit offers to traffic boosted sales? The title pretty much says it all. I had 52 clicks today but only 2 submits, just want to figure out how to improve this ratio. Thanks :] Blink

08-03-2011, 05:11 PM	#2
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Blink Active Warrior Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: Oxford, England. Posts: 52 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: Did u find that spelling out what to do on email submit offers to traffic boosted sales? hey jeff, my site is here -> riha--ailluminati.com (replace -'s with n's) ive only had the site for 1 day so havent really had time to do much to it. What would you recommend me to do to increase offer completion rate? Cheers.

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jeffrey73 AdCopyAssault.com War Room Member Join Date: Apr 2010 Location: USA Posts: 2,073 Thanks: 1,249 Thanked 450 Times in 374 Posts	Re: Did u find that spelling out what to do on email submit offers to traffic boosted sales? No, I meant your PPC ad you are using to drive the traffic. As far as your lander goes, not bad. You did put Rihanna's picture under the fold, so you could probably make the design better. Possibly get rid of the header banner as I don't think it's necessary. Some possible reasons your offer is not converting well could be: - You say win a "free gift" but not WHAT the free gift actually is - You aren't targeting the right crowd - This "Illuminati" thing is becoming over-played and therefore is becoming too saturated. Try a different traffic source if you are using YouTube - People have seen the Win a Free I-Pad offer too much on the traffic source, so you will have to be more creative with your campaign.
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08-04-2011, 06:35 AM	#6
Blink Active Warrior Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: Oxford, England. Posts: 52 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: Did u find that spelling out what to do on email submit offers to traffic boosted sales? to be honest the only way I drove traffic yesterday (the only day ive had the website so far xD) was by commenting on videos on youtube. I'll take your suggestions on board and see what I can do with that :].

08-07-2011, 08:59 AM	#7
Blink Active Warrior Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: Oxford, England. Posts: 52 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: Did u find that spelling out what to do on email submit offers to traffic boosted sales? ive changed around quite a few things on the site, could someone give me some feedback please and also I would like to know if going for a download/install offer rather than email submit offer works out better for a site like mine? just wondering. Thanks