Would like some advice/feedback on a new offer im promoting.

Blink · 08-10-2011, 08:02 AM

Hey guys,

I got accepted by peerfly recently which im very happy about and decided to setup something new for one of their offers that I liked the conversion % of.

can you guys check out my landing page and tell me what you think/what you think might need adjusting etc.

Thanks!

Blink

www. freefoodanywhere .com

jordanberg2311 · 08-10-2011, 08:33 AM

looks good,

I'm not sure where are you getting the traffic but try to build it same colour and font sizes similar to where your traffic coming from

Blink · 08-10-2011, 09:42 AM

thanks for the reply buddy, will take your advice on-board. anyone else got any recommendations?

imback · 08-10-2011, 10:05 AM

Not bad clean it up a little and maybe use friendlier colors. Of course you would want to split test this.

CHAD

Barb Thornback · 08-10-2011, 10:15 AM

I would suggest the landing page to be smaller, so viewers
can see everthing above the fold.
I would prefer to see from 'Why Are You Paying for Food' downwards, so
the link for your offer is visible without scrolling down.

imback · 08-10-2011, 10:20 AM

Yes keep the Call to Action above the fold and easier to see....in this case it would be clicking your banner.

CHAD

Blink · 08-10-2011, 10:27 AM

really appreciate the feedback guys, working on it now.

COPEAC Steve · 08-10-2011, 10:30 AM

OP - Just a heads up i tried to find your site by searching for keywords related to your website and i found you (ranked pretty high too, congrats) but when i click the result i get sent to an error page.

COPEAC Steve · 08-10-2011, 10:51 AM

Also, the offer LP is pretty nice. i would take the same approach they do on the LP, you dont really have a border around the click-able image which is pretty much anywhere on the website, i would use a border like the one used on the offer LP on your website so there is consistency.

I would also take the As Seen On logo's they list on the landing page and use those on your website, might instil some confidence in the consumer's mind.

Blink · 08-10-2011, 10:59 AM

thanks alot buddy, will try to also implement that stuff :]

08-10-2011, 08:02 AM	#1
Blink Active Warrior Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: Oxford, England. Posts: 52 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Would like some advice/feedback on a new offer im promoting. Hey guys, I got accepted by peerfly recently which im very happy about and decided to setup something new for one of their offers that I liked the conversion % of. can you guys check out my landing page and tell me what you think/what you think might need adjusting etc. Thanks! Blink www. freefoodanywhere .com

08-10-2011, 08:33 AM	#2
jordanberg2311 Advanced Warrior Join Date: May 2010 Posts: 588 Thanks: 3 Thanked 82 Times in 67 Posts	Re: Would like some advice/feedback on a new offer im promoting. looks good, I'm not sure where are you getting the traffic but try to build it same colour and font sizes similar to where your traffic coming from

08-10-2011, 09:42 AM	#3
Blink Active Warrior Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: Oxford, England. Posts: 52 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: Would like some advice/feedback on a new offer im promoting. thanks for the reply buddy, will take your advice on-board. anyone else got any recommendations?

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imback Senior Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: United States Posts: 1,429 Thanks: 129 Thanked 279 Times in 199 Posts	Re: Would like some advice/feedback on a new offer im promoting. Not bad clean it up a little and maybe use friendlier colors. Of course you would want to split test this. CHAD
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Barb Thornback HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: , , United Kingdom. Posts: 385 Thanks: 9 Thanked 9 Times in 8 Posts	Re: Would like some advice/feedback on a new offer im promoting. I would suggest the landing page to be smaller, so viewers can see everthing above the fold. I would prefer to see from 'Why Are You Paying for Food' downwards, so the link for your offer is visible without scrolling down.
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08-10-2011, 10:20 AM	#6
imback Senior Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: United States Posts: 1,429 Thanks: 129 Thanked 279 Times in 199 Posts	Re: Would like some advice/feedback on a new offer im promoting. Yes keep the Call to Action above the fold and easier to see....in this case it would be clicking your banner. CHAD
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08-10-2011, 10:27 AM	#7
Blink Active Warrior Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: Oxford, England. Posts: 52 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: Would like some advice/feedback on a new offer im promoting. really appreciate the feedback guys, working on it now.

08-10-2011, 10:30 AM	#8
COPEAC Steve HyperActive Warrior Join Date: Mar 2011 Posts: 202 Thanks: 0 Thanked 46 Times in 37 Posts	Re: Would like some advice/feedback on a new offer im promoting. OP - Just a heads up i tried to find your site by searching for keywords related to your website and i found you (ranked pretty high too, congrats) but when i click the result i get sent to an error page.

08-10-2011, 10:51 AM	#9
COPEAC Steve HyperActive Warrior Join Date: Mar 2011 Posts: 202 Thanks: 0 Thanked 46 Times in 37 Posts	Re: Would like some advice/feedback on a new offer im promoting. Also, the offer LP is pretty nice. i would take the same approach they do on the LP, you dont really have a border around the click-able image which is pretty much anywhere on the website, i would use a border like the one used on the offer LP on your website so there is consistency. I would also take the As Seen On logo's they list on the landing page and use those on your website, might instil some confidence in the consumer's mind.

08-10-2011, 10:59 AM	#10
Blink Active Warrior Join Date: Aug 2011 Location: Oxford, England. Posts: 52 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: Would like some advice/feedback on a new offer im promoting. thanks alot buddy, will try to also implement that stuff :]