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Need your opinion on my LP!

by smolodoy
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Hey everyone been working on this lender for quite some time:

HCG Diet – HCG Diet Drops Reviews & Information

and then had it going on search engines bidding on targetted keywords only on HCG Diet but it just doesn't do well, my on page CTR is pretty low, about 15% what am I doing wrong? I have changed many things already but still it not close to be profitable at all.

I'm aiming for positions 2-4 on search engines and thats where my ads at, my CTR on searche engines is around 2% which is pretty good, I just can't seem to figure out what am I missing here? Please advice, thank you!
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  • Profile picture of the author jeffrey73
    Have you checked out what other similar product pages look like on the Search Engines?

    How about Google Sponsored ads that have been around for a while? Usually these people aren't going to spend the money to keep advertising their sites if their page isn't converting.

    What about putting an email capture field to the right and giving those diet tips in a free e-book? Then you can mail them your offers on the back-end. Honestly I think people are getting wise to these "Top Choice" review style sites.

    Great overall design BTW. I think you just need to tweak a few things.
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  • Profile picture of the author imback
    Clean up the pictures and eliminate the banners.

    Add a Web Form to the sidebar and give away a free weight loss ebook for something for exchange of their e-mail

    Move the slider and testimonals below the side bar as well as the two boxes to the right


    Minimize the paragraph length and use a larger font


    Hope it helps...

    CHAD
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  • Profile picture of the author smolodoy
    Thank for some tips here, do you guys really think that people would rather have shorter reviews without all of that much images?

    Yes, I did look around of my competitors pages and do that much, and none of them didn't look appealing to me at all, some of them is just like a webstore at the checkout point..
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  • Profile picture of the author smolodoy
    Ok I will give that a try, another questions you say that I should offer them a free ebook and then market them the product, does it really work? Do people download it and start reading it right away and what you do is include an offer at the end? Or do you hit them with some offers few days later, but wouldn't they already bought what they were looking for?
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  • Profile picture of the author imback
    Yep like my man Jeff told you it is simply giving them an eBook of VALUE for exchange of their email address.

    You need an autoresponder like aWeber, Getresponse, etc.

    Make sure the eBook you give away you have rights too and is Very High Quality!

    Also, it doesn't have to be an ebook. It just needs to be something of Value.



    CHAD
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