Can You Critique My Landing Page?

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I've never made one before, so this is a first attempt. I was thinking about doing PPC ads to direct traffic to the site, but wanted the opinions of some Warriors! I'm not sure if this is even appropriate, and if not then I apologize and moderator please delete this post. But if it's all good, I would really appreciate if you could check it out:
stressandanxietyfree dot blogspot dotcom

I would greatly appreciate any kind of feedback you could offer! Thanks :-)
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  • Profile picture of the author TipTopMarketer
    Looks reat matey! And that's your first blog review you've done - congrats!

    I see you're an affiliate through the CJ network yes?

    You just need traffic to your blog now
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    • Profile picture of the author aekaplan
      Yes, I'm signed up through Commission Junction. I guess now it's time to drive traffic! I'm planning on doing articles and YouTube videos.... still a little wary on PPC though.

      Any other thoughts on points of improvement for the landing page? I imagine an email capture would be good, but I don't have an Aweber account and since I haven't made a dime yet off IM (just started last week), I'm not sure if it's worth it to pay $20/month when there's nothing coming in. Thoughts?
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  • Profile picture of the author creck01
    Ya looks good the only thing i would suggest is add some more places for people to click on a link to buy the product. When i started i was afraid of putting to many links on pages but i find when you put it right in the persons face they are more likley to click and buy the product.
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  • Profile picture of the author aekaplan
    Harvey, those are all really great points, and thank you very much for your insights! I agree with you on the Aweber account, and I'm going to go ahead and do that. You brought up so much fantastic stuff, and I thank you. I will be making all of those changes in the days to come. Much appreciated!
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  • Profile picture of the author onefreekiwinz
    Well done for first time...
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