Review my campaign! LP included

taktikz · 08-27-2009, 02:22 AM

Estimated Traffic
Google AdWords Keyword Tool: 1,600 (exact searches/month) 6,600 (broad)
WordTracker: 11/day

Total Sites on Google (broad): 1,800,000
Total Sites on Google (exact): 7,210
Total Sites on Google (allintitle): 4,360

Current Google Position: #4

Was in position #10 and #11 before using Angela's packet.

I've gotten 26 clicks to the offer page from my site and 1 sale with a CTR of 3.86%
Not sure if the sale was due to SEO or recommending it on Yahoo Answers/Forums

The site also has 6 unique articles, 1 on each sub-page

mandela10 · 08-27-2009, 02:47 AM

I could have some idea if I could see something from the page.

taktikz · 08-27-2009, 02:52 AM

what do you need to see? The layout is there...

taktikz · 08-27-2009, 02:27 PM

Any others?

dburk · 08-27-2009, 04:15 PM

Hi taktikz,

I find your landing page a bit confusing. You offer a subscription before I even know what the page is about. Which action am I suppose to take? Subscribe or free trial?

Two column layout is bad for landing pages, too difficult to control the eye path, leads to unsupervised thinking and inconsistent presentation of your persuasion formula.

The Title (of what I can see ) makes me want to hit the back button right away. Banners really suck for landing pages. Can't tell much more without seeing the actual sales copy.

08-27-2009, 02:47 AM	#2
mandela10 Persistence is my way out Join Date: Aug 2009 Location: Florida Posts: 31 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	Re: Review my campaign! LP included I could have some idea if I could see something from the page.
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08-27-2009, 02:52 AM	#3
taktikz Warrior Member Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Tampa Posts: 19 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Review my campaign! LP included what do you need to see? The layout is there...

08-27-2009, 04:15 PM	#5
dburk Senior Warrior Member Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Tampa, Florida Posts: 2,235 Thanks: 20 Thanked 184 Times in 167 Posts	Re: Review my campaign! LP included Hi taktikz, I find your landing page a bit confusing. You offer a subscription before I even know what the page is about. Which action am I suppose to take? Subscribe or free trial? Two column layout is bad for landing pages, too difficult to control the eye path, leads to unsupervised thinking and inconsistent presentation of your persuasion formula. The Title (of what I can see ) makes me want to hit the back button right away. Banners really suck for landing pages. Can't tell much more without seeing the actual sales copy.
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08-27-2009, 02:22 AM	#1
taktikz Warrior Member Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Tampa Posts: 19 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Review my campaign! LP included Estimated Traffic Google AdWords Keyword Tool: 1,600 (exact searches/month) 6,600 (broad) WordTracker: 11/day Total Sites on Google (broad): 1,800,000 Total Sites on Google (exact): 7,210 Total Sites on Google (allintitle): 4,360 Current Google Position: #4 Was in position #10 and #11 before using Angela's packet. I've gotten 26 clicks to the offer page from my site and 1 sale with a CTR of 3.86% Not sure if the sale was due to SEO or recommending it on Yahoo Answers/Forums The site also has 6 unique articles, 1 on each sub-page

08-27-2009, 02:27 PM	#4
taktikz Warrior Member Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: Tampa Posts: 19 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Review my campaign! LP included Any others?