Hey! Need your help guys!

[trytolearnmore]

Hey guys!

I've created an Xfactor blog HeartDiamondRingReviews.com (I target the keyword "Heart Diamond Ring"). I've created this blog on April 22 2010.

Currently I'm on page 21 on Google for the keywords (heart diamond ring). But for ("heart diamond ring") i am number 3.

How can I improve my rankings for the keyword Heart Diamond Ring? (without the quotation marks)

Some info about my blog:

• I've bought Angela's backlinks (For April and May)
• According to Yahoo sitexplorer i have 41 inlinks (I'm sure the number of my inlinks is way higher. At least because i've used Angela's backlinks)
• I've written 9 articles on Ezine and 9 on GoArticles.com (with my link in the author box)
• I've submitted some press releases (I bought PressBot + i added some manually)
• I've submitted my RSS feeds to some directories (I have a RSSbot analogy)
• I've commented on EDU and GOV blogs
• I've used Classified Ads to promote my site

I considered buying "The Best Spinner" for increasing the number of articles on Ezine (I would do it manually, but i hate writing)

So, what are your tips?

Best regards,
Andrii

[Jill Carpenter]

The blog is fairly new. Have you looked at the competition, analyzed their sites, and learned why they are where they are?

Also, you should not be freaking out that you are not page one for such a short time.

[trytolearnmore]

Thanks Jill for the answer.

I did not want to leave an impression that i'm desperate or freaking out. I just want to make sure that i did enough.

If not, could you please give me some tips.

[trytolearnmore]

Should i do only article marketing now?

[jasonmorgan]

According to Yahoo sitexplorer i have 41 inlinks (I'm sure the number of my inlinks is way higher. At least because i've used Angela's backlinks)

Just because you used her packs doesn't mean your links were ever found.

BacklinkWatch has you at 46 with most coming from WF, DP and Ezinearticles.

I've created this blog on April 22 2010

Give it some time.

[Flaura78]

Originally Posted by trytolearnmore

Should i do only article marketing now?

Well, it is a very competitive keyword, hard to rank on page one with a new blog.

No. 1
Add new content and submit site or social bookmark
No 2
2 articles a day a minimum, and more than just Goarticles and Ezine
No 3.
Try Press Releases as it is great for your backlinks. (You just basically rewrite an article and create a company profile.)
No 4
Social media ad social bookmarking

Try to focus on these and you will rank better.

P. s. Have you seen your competition?
shopping. yahoo and www. nextag.com/
You have to work harder to beat the authority sites .
By the way: I would rather target " heart diamond ring reviews" as it has only 1.700.000 broad and 4500 exact results.

[trytolearnmore]

Originally Posted by jasonmorgan

Just because you used her packs doesn't mean your links were ever found.

BacklinkWatch has you at 46 with most coming from WF, DP and Ezinearticles.


Give it some time.

Ok, will do!

[trytolearnmore]

Originally Posted by Flaura78

Well, it is a very competitive keyword, hard to rank on page one with a new blog.

No. 1
Add new content and submit site or social bookmark
No 2
2 articles a day a minimum, and more than just Goarticles and Ezine
No 3.
Try Press Releases as it is great for your backlinks. (You just basically rewrite an article and create a company profile.)
No 4
Social media ad social bookmarking

Try to focus on these and you will rank better.

P. s. Have you seen your competition?
shopping. yahoo and www. nextag.com/
You have to work harder to beat the authority sites .
By the way: I would rather target " heart diamond ring reviews" as it has only 1.700.000 broad and 4500 exact results.

1) The Xfactor method implies that you need only 1 article.
2) 2 articles a day... that's a great tip. Will do that
3) Already wrote press releases (I even bought Pressbot)
4) I'm doing social bookmarking already

Yep, i see that these sites are "hardcore", but not a while ago there was a site (also an Xfactor site with only 1 article), which was outranking them all. Now it is empty, but it was still #2 on Google.

http://heartdiamondring.org/

That's strange. I've just checked again in Google Keyword Tool and "heart diamond ring reviews" has not enough data on "Broad". What keyword tool are you using?

Best regards,
Andrii

[usearchme2]

Forget about backlinks, you need to get your content right first!

Your content is horrible just read it, it doesnt make much sense to me!

No wonder your on page 21, how many times do you mention heart diamond ring in the first paragraph, in fact on the whole site?? just count them ??

Sort your content out, then think about marketing, as your wasting ur time if your content isnt right.

Woc

[trytolearnmore]

Originally Posted by usearchme2

Forget about backlinks, you need to get your content right first!

Your content is horrible just read it, it doesnt make much sense to me!

No wonder your on page 21, how many times do you mention heart diamond ring in the first paragraph, in fact on the whole site?? just count them ??

Sort your content out, then think about marketing, as your wasting ur time if your content isnt right.

Woc

That was the whole point of this article But I agree, the content could have been written a bit better

[usearchme2]

lol fair enough, rewrite it or get someone professional to do it for u (dont mention heart shaped rings 3 times in the first paragraph there is no need lol) and you will probably rise 10 pages over night once you have been re-indexed.

Woc

[Darren Hodgson]

Originally Posted by usearchme2

Forget about backlinks, you need to get your content right first!

Your content is horrible just read it, it doesnt make much sense to me!

No wonder your on page 21, how many times do you mention heart diamond ring in the first paragraph, in fact on the whole site?? just count them ??

Sort your content out, then think about marketing, as your wasting ur time if your content isnt right.

Woc

I agree it looks abit spammy to me. Google will penalize you for using your keyword too much. Go easy on it.

I had a look at your source code, there's about 15 mentions of your keyword in the head alone. You've mentioned it 3 time in your title and subtitle. I'd say once in the title and once in the subtitle max.

When you write and article try for about 1 - 1.5% keyword density. Also there's no LSI keywords in your tags so I assuming you've not included them anywhere else either.

Type in your keyword phrase into google and scroll down to the bottom. There you'll find some search suggestions from google. If you can try and include at least 3 of these in your article a few times.

[trytolearnmore]

Thanks guys!

You are really helpful!

[trytolearnmore]

Ok, i've added a new article (i used WProbot)

[usearchme2]

lol its better but it still a bit spammy, write your content naturally forget about keyword density, I can tell just by reading it your putting the words in to get your keywords mentioned over and over and it just reads a bit contrived, i think if you revise it a bit more, you should be sorted.

Also why make the first bit of text on the page link to the homepage ?? huh !

In some instances you dont even need to mention a keyword to rank for it, contary to some peoples belief, so ive no idea why you have written your content like that with the keywords repeated over and over.

Woc

[ninal]

Regarding content, it does look spammy and you should definitely rewrite it or at least have your next articles written way better than this. You should also lessen the use of exclamation marks, I feel like I'm getting screamed at when I was reading your page .

[trytolearnmore]

This content was not written by me. WProbot spitted out some articles, i've chosen the most appropriate. Originally this article was about Diamond rings, but i've added in 3-4 places to the "diamond ring" the word "heart"

[usearchme2]

dohhhh

WP Robot is a powerful and easy to use autoblog plugin for Wordpress weblogs allowing you to turn your blog on complete auto-pilot and drip-feed it with fresh content in intervals you specify.

If you cant be bothered to write your own content then whats the point in having your own site ? no wonder it doesnt make sense !

Such tactics are only going to hinder ur progress not help it, after all i spotted the problem with just a glance at ur site, dont u think Google will do the same ?

Woc

[trytolearnmore]

Originally Posted by usearchme2

dohhhh

WP Robot is a powerful and easy to use autoblog plugin for Wordpress weblogs allowing you to turn your blog on complete auto-pilot and drip-feed it with fresh content in intervals you specify.

If you cant be bothered to write your own content then whats the point in having your own site ? no wonder it doesnt make sense !

Such tactics are only going to hinder ur progress not help it, after all i spotted the problem with just a glance at ur site, dont u think Google will do the same ?

Woc

That would be true, if i wouldn't sell a similar site that was ranked #3 for 67$.

P.S Thanks for your help