Evaluate My Site

cowboy123 · 09-27-2010, 09:37 AM

Hey guys, well spent a long time building the site and done a good amount of SEO but no ranking yet (doesn't help that it's flash, I know)

Electric Bicycle,Electric Bike,Ebike - Electric Lions

Anyway, I'm doing Adwords in the meantime and it's not converting. Any thoughts, suggestions ?

cowboy123 · 09-27-2010, 05:22 PM

don't be shy..

inter123 · 09-27-2010, 05:34 PM

At $999+. they are quite expensive.

Clear Seven · 09-27-2010, 06:33 PM

Where are you based and what places do you ship out to ?

Mike Adams · 09-27-2010, 07:05 PM

@cowboy123 I think it look great! (Not knowing your ranking) If I were you I would change the Title tag. Remember that the title tag and description act as, essentially, and ad. When people search "electric bike" and "Electric Bicycle,Electric Bike,Ebike - Electric Lions" comes up without a description, it looks spammy from the SERP. If I were you I would have something like:

TITLE: Electric Bicycle,Electric Bike,Ebike - Electric Lions
DESCRIPTION: A comprehensive overview of many different kinds of light electric vehicles, including electric bicycles.

Being on the first page is important, but is irrelevant if nobody clicks through. So, just look at your title and description as an ad.

Great site again

cowboy123 · 09-27-2010, 08:58 PM

thanks for the tips!

yes they are a little expensive. just the battery itself is costly. it's based in the US and ships to the US and Europe

un · 09-27-2010, 09:23 PM

the site looks really cool but the load time was kinda slow for me.

If I were you I would just make the big animation thing in the middle embedded in a static page, and add some text beneath it or something. This would actually offer some meat for the search engines to chew on. Get rid of the flash links at the top too, make them links to actual pages.

When I search google for "site:electriclions.com" all it picks up really is that your domain exists. If you had actual static pages with real text on them, there would be more to pick up on.

I could totally be wrong on this but I didn't think anyone really relied on flash for ecommerce.

09-27-2010, 09:37 AM	#1
cowboy123 Active Warrior Join Date: Mar 2010 Posts: 39 Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Evaluate My Site Hey guys, well spent a long time building the site and done a good amount of SEO but no ranking yet (doesn't help that it's flash, I know) Electric Bicycle,Electric Bike,Ebike - Electric Lions Anyway, I'm doing Adwords in the meantime and it's not converting. Any thoughts, suggestions ?
	electric bike electric bicycles

09-27-2010, 05:22 PM	#2
cowboy123 Active Warrior Join Date: Mar 2010 Posts: 39 Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Evaluate My Site don't be shy..
	electric bike electric bicycles

09-27-2010, 05:34 PM	#3
inter123 Advanced Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Dec 2009 Posts: 872 Thanks: 117 Thanked 42 Times in 37 Posts	Re: Evaluate My Site At $999+. they are quite expensive.

09-27-2010, 06:33 PM	#4
Clear Seven Warrior Member Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: Leeds, West Yorkshire Posts: 24 Thanks: 5 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: Evaluate My Site Where are you based and what places do you ship out to ?

09-27-2010, 07:05 PM	#5
Mike Adams Long Time Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Dec 2008 Location: United States Posts: 591 Blog Entries: 2 Thanks: 17 Thanked 106 Times in 54 Posts Contact Info	Re: Evaluate My Site @cowboy123 I think it look great! (Not knowing your ranking) If I were you I would change the Title tag. Remember that the title tag and description act as, essentially, and ad. When people search "electric bike" and "Electric Bicycle,Electric Bike,Ebike - Electric Lions" comes up without a description, it looks spammy from the SERP. If I were you I would have something like: TITLE: Electric Bicycle,Electric Bike,Ebike - Electric Lions DESCRIPTION: A comprehensive overview of many different kinds of light electric vehicles, including electric bicycles. Being on the first page is important, but is irrelevant if nobody clicks through. So, just look at your title and description as an ad. Great site again
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09-27-2010, 08:58 PM	#6
cowboy123 Active Warrior Join Date: Mar 2010 Posts: 39 Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Evaluate My Site thanks for the tips! yes they are a little expensive. just the battery itself is costly. it's based in the US and ships to the US and Europe
	electric bike electric bicycles

09-27-2010, 09:23 PM	#7
un 2hourdrive.com Join Date: Jan 2010 Posts: 109 Thanks: 22 Thanked 11 Times in 11 Posts	Re: Evaluate My Site the site looks really cool but the load time was kinda slow for me. If I were you I would just make the big animation thing in the middle embedded in a static page, and add some text beneath it or something. This would actually offer some meat for the search engines to chew on. Get rid of the flash links at the top too, make them links to actual pages. When I search google for "site:electriclions.com" all it picks up really is that your domain exists. If you had actual static pages with real text on them, there would be more to pick up on. I could totally be wrong on this but I didn't think anyone really relied on flash for ecommerce.