Help, please critique my unsucessfull ppc ad

[robdedgar]

Please let me know what you think of this ppc text ad that I am using on 7Search. I have had over 150 visitors and not one sign up on a free referral service.

Are You Behind On Your Mortgage?
Stop Foreclosure and Save Your Home! Get a free consultation with a specialist from your local area. Fill out the information and a representative will call you!
Find a loan modification professional

Thanks

Rob

[tryinhere]

Originally Posted by robdedgar

Please let me know what you think of this ppc text ad that I am using on 7Search. I have had over 150 visitors and not one sign up on a free referral service.

Are You Behind On Your Mortgage?
Stop Foreclosure and Save Your Home! Get a free consultation with a specialist from your local area. Fill out the information and a representative will call you!
Find a loan modification professional

Thanks
Rob

Rob ? is it the ad thats letting you down as it has sent 150 people to the site / or is it the site that has turned no conversions, there are two parts that need to tango.

your destination url seems like a cpa type re-divert offer as i ended up on a survey page ? so unless your ads are geo targeted it probably has a leak there where people agr seeing some other crap than what they were expecting to see, failing that it may bee the message needs to more clear or on topic or the page is not converting as you expected.

[robdedgar]

The ad is geo targeted to all homeonwers in the US. I am thinking it is the text that is keeping the traffic from converting.

What do you think of this ad.