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Old 05-30-2011, 08:37 PM   #1
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What do I need to do to make it better and make money off it? Should I use adsense? Is the SEO good? What about my rank? I think google dropped it, I used to be in top 10.

Thanks in advance, really appreciate it.
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In terms of design, the theme is too simple perhaps? It didn't catch my eyes at all. You don't have many content as well.

Adsense would be great option to monetize your website. Good luck

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In terms of design, the theme is too simple perhaps? It didn't catch my eyes at all. You don't have many content as well.

Adsense would be great option to monetize your website. Good luck

Thank you. I am not really sure how to design it better. I figured keeping it simple makes it easy to navigate? Any suggestions?
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What do I need to do to make it better and make money off it? Should I use adsense? Is the SEO good? What about my rank? I think google dropped it, I used to be in top 10.

Thanks in advance, really appreciate it. midsectionfat.org
Change your Blog title to: Best Way To Lose Belly Fat or How To Get Rid Of Belly Fat

Make the front page "blog posts" instead of a static page.

Hire someone to make you a nice logo. (To make it more of an authority)

I checked your backlinks. Your website really needs more backlinks. If you want to achieve top rankings.

The backlinks you currently have do not have the proper "anchors"

You don't have one link that points back with the anchor "how to get rid of belly fat" or " lose belly fat" and I assume that's what you want to rank for.

Hope that helps let me know if you have any other questions.
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Never out your website/niche like this, never.
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Never out your website/niche like this, never.
That is true, but this niche is very popular every knows about it.

But revealing your website is another thing.
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Default Re: Can you please critique my website?

Here are few comments:

1. Image on the first page is distracting. When I am there I don't know what kind of website is this.

2. On Page SEO is poor. Not enough words on the first page article.

3. Not professionally designed. To be honest, I think people will leave your site straight in less than 1 minute.

Check this:

Do you see reduction in bounce rate?

Remember, Google is going to put more and more emphasis on the user experience. Give your user good stuff + proper SEO and Google will love you.

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Wow, thanks guys. Will get to work on it right away.

I have other projects that I would never out. Didn't think this one would be a big deal.
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Change your Blog title to: Best Way To Lose Belly Fat or How To Get Rid Of Belly Fat

Make the front page "blog posts" instead of a static page.

Hire someone to make you a nice logo. (To make it more of an authority)

I checked your backlinks. Your website really needs more backlinks. If you want to achieve top rankings.

The backlinks you currently have do not have the proper "anchors"

You don't have one link that points back with the anchor "how to get rid of belly fat" or " lose belly fat" and I assume that's what you want to rank for.

Hope that helps let me know if you have any other questions.

Could you by any chance point me to a good backlink checker that is free? Seems the ones I have tried don't allow me to see the things you have on my backlinks. I do need to fix my anchors, that is true!
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