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| Active Warrior Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: Savannah Ga
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Here is my ad for a PPC campaign with 7search. I recently added the last sentence of "Download the FREE toolbar here." I ran this ad on a .05 per click campaign with a budget of $25 to test, and only made 8 conversions. I did not have the last sentence in the first ad campaign. I am hoping for some critiquing. Please give me some advice Here is my ad: Download coupons for groceries to gadgets, promo codes, coupons, and freebies. No credit card needed! Download the FREE toolbar here Page is loading, please wait! At this time I am not concerned with capturing emails, I am only concerned with conversions. Thanks |
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I forgot to add the Headliner is, "Are you looking for Coupons?"
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Hey Rob, To me it sounds good ! Good luck ! |
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What is the line "Page is loading, please wait!" Not sure exactly, but this could have a negative impact on your potential visitors. |
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