Please Critique My Ad

robdedgar · 11-14-2011, 08:30 PM

Here is my ad for a PPC campaign with 7search. I recently added the last sentence of "Download the FREE toolbar here." I ran this ad on a .05 per click campaign with a budget of $25 to test, and only made 8 conversions. I did not have the last sentence in the first ad campaign. I am hoping for some critiquing. Please give me some advice

Here is my ad:
Download coupons for groceries to gadgets, promo codes, coupons, and freebies. No credit card needed! Download the FREE toolbar here
Page is loading, please wait!

At this time I am not concerned with capturing emails, I am only concerned with conversions. Thanks

robdedgar · 11-14-2011, 08:33 PM

I forgot to add the Headliner is, "Are you looking for Coupons?"

MarkAdam · 11-17-2011, 09:13 AM

Hey Rob,

To me it sounds good !

Good luck !

webdevpro · 11-17-2011, 11:31 AM

What is the line "Page is loading, please wait!"

Not sure exactly, but this could have a negative impact on your potential visitors.

11-14-2011, 08:30 PM	#1
robdedgar Active Warrior Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: Savannah Ga Posts: 59 Thanks: 4 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Social Networking	Please Critique My Ad Here is my ad for a PPC campaign with 7search. I recently added the last sentence of "Download the FREE toolbar here." I ran this ad on a .05 per click campaign with a budget of $25 to test, and only made 8 conversions. I did not have the last sentence in the first ad campaign. I am hoping for some critiquing. Please give me some advice Here is my ad: Download coupons for groceries to gadgets, promo codes, coupons, and freebies. No credit card needed! Download the FREE toolbar here Page is loading, please wait! At this time I am not concerned with capturing emails, I am only concerned with conversions. Thanks

11-14-2011, 08:33 PM	#2
robdedgar Active Warrior Join Date: Jan 2011 Location: Savannah Ga Posts: 59 Thanks: 4 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Social Networking	Re: Please Critique My Ad I forgot to add the Headliner is, "Are you looking for Coupons?"

11-17-2011, 09:13 AM	#3
MarkAdam Warrior Member Join Date: Oct 2011 Posts: 18 Thanks: 1 Thanked 3 Times in 3 Posts	Re: Please Critique My Ad Hey Rob, To me it sounds good ! Good luck !

11-17-2011, 11:31 AM	#4
webdevpro HyperActive Warrior Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 294 Thanks: 0 Thanked 23 Times in 22 Posts	Re: Please Critique My Ad What is the line "Page is loading, please wait!" Not sure exactly, but this could have a negative impact on your potential visitors.
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