15th Oct 2014, 10:09 AM | #1 |
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Hello all, I've had a few problems with my sales page. I get around 2 sales a month with an average of 60 visitors a day with on an avergae 2 pageviews per user. Can you tell me in which way this website isn't convincing a user? Rather, compelling a user to buy?! Here is my website : Hackbook | Learn How to Hack | Hacking eBook Any help is appreciated! Best Regards, John |
15th Oct 2014, 10:25 AM | #2 |
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Put your offer at the top of the page. What is unique about the information in your book that will make me want to keep reading. The sales page is boring and uninspired, so why would I think the book is any better? Illustrate a use case or some other example that makes me picture using the skills you teach. Address a problem I have that would make me want to buy the book. |
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15th Oct 2014, 10:47 AM | #4 |
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What are your thoughts on this theme with a bold and catchy headline? http://csmthemes.com/themes/book/default/ |
3rd Nov 2014, 08:41 PM | #5 |
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The theme looks pretty good. If you can combine it with great copy and product I think it would definitely be a sales booster.
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6th Nov 2014, 02:41 PM | #6 |
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I love the concept behind the product. I wonder if the price point being over $20 is deterring? For instance, I know nothing about hacking. I'm somewhat interested in learning. As a total beginner, I could find tons of free content online to get started, no? And even if not, since I know nothing about hacking, how would I know that your digital materials contain better information than what I'd find elsewhere for free? (I'm just playing devil's advocate here... please don't hack me! LOL) I'm not suggesting it's a bad product. I'm tempted to buy it myself, to be honest. But I'm also wondering where your visitors are coming from...? And what their level of knowledge or interest in hacking is? Perhaps the traffic you are generating is the issue? I have a feeling total beginners wouldn't be very likely to buy this. |
6th Nov 2014, 07:37 PM | #7 |
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I really like your new theme, it looks awesome. Also I'd offer them the free preview sooner (and make it look amazing) - I only saw its an option after I accidentally scrolled to the bottom of the page.
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* Put Your Head ling Font Some Smaller....(Ever You want......) * Close few Padding/margins After Learn More Button. If Possible add a shadow Line.. *Your Logo Still Needs to be In PNG... Showing Some Difference Colors. * Make Semantic All Your Feature Paragraphs. *Better Put Off the Static.. * Make All The Background Green(Relevant To your E book Cover) Where You Used Blue and just use the font in white(#FFFFF) Hope it will Increase A Lot... Thanks | |
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7th Nov 2014, 10:51 AM | #9 |
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A complete critique is something that could take hours. To give some of the most important advice in a single post ... you may want to consider having a single action for them to take on the page. Having many different actions they can take on one page tends to make it less likely they'll take any of them. Also, your graphics are distracting from the copy, and making it harder to read ... and more confusing. This tends to lower sales. You may consider getting copy working first without graphics and then add them in later ... but test that they improve sales when you do add them. They may not. |
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7th Nov 2014, 11:14 AM | #10 |
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Hi.... Don't worry. Your keyword put google search engine top page. Highlight your offer. Give a good offer plus ad some free offer. And marketing your product.... |
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7th Nov 2014, 01:25 PM | #11 |
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I would unhighlight the word 'be' in the subheadline and just start at the word 'AMAZED' I would also take down the picture of "Emma" because it just looks like a fiverr gig. Idk how many "hackers" use fiverr for outsourcing.. Also, I would set the price point at something that ends in just a 7, like $17 or $27, not $21.3 that honestly just looks uninviting Also, don't give so many call to actions. You're giving a ton of options to 'learn more' or 'buy now' or 'reach out for more info' that's a lot of options and can be really distracting |
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Apart from those points raised.. do you have any plus points or cons? | |
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The site is appealing as it is - any pro's and cons have been answered already here above so far. A bold and catchy headline as you propose yourself would be better, but I like the theme and lay out you have put up. |
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12th Nov 2014, 10:05 AM | #17 |
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I'm not really sure of a headline at the moment. It needs to sound more 'legal' I guess.
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18th Nov 2014, 12:47 AM | #18 |
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you create the best banner to sale your site and send to every one Email.
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18th Nov 2014, 04:11 AM | #19 |
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yellow highlights is terrrible and spammy looking
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