ayman25

Hello there ,

I'm a software engineer student and i have been studying affiliate marketing in every free time i have , i'm so into this that i invest my free time into watching vidoes , reading about this amazing job.

after 2 months of learning i decided to make my first move , my monthly budget is kinda limited and as a student i really feel every penny i pay and i don't really mind paying in order to learn as long as i benefit from it.

Any ways , after getting some extra cash this month i started with a clickbank product for photography , i searched on google adwords planner and i've made sure that the nich is good enough, the product seemed legit and the price is reasonable.

I made this website using Adobe Muse, Photography tutorials

I have used 7search as my advertiser since i can't pay 200$ in media traffic and im not ready yet for Leadimpact,Trafficvance.

I started yesterday and so far i got 100 visitors , paid something around 7$ and i still got 43$.

0 sales so far , 0 mail submission , i'm not shocked or depressed as i knew this would happen ~.~..

I would really appreciate your professional feedback , tell me what i did wrong and how to fix it , I know this is the noobish website or landing page u have ever seen but hey, we all gotta start somewhere no ? ..

Thanks for reading and sorry for my English as it is my 2nd language ,

Enjoy your day!.

ayman25

Edited:
1) Removed the hyperlinks on pictures.
2) Moved the sign up box from the bottom to header of the page.
3) added 3 new points next to the sign up.
4) added a new picture to fill up the space.

JayKay Dowdall

Okay, let's get started here:

1) Headline: It's poor. Where is the desire to read? Okay, so your tutorials are cheap, great! But I can find free tutorials online via YouTube...I'm clicking away to search for that instead *gasp* A better headline might be something like:


2) Content: Under the headline, I would add a subheadline, to create an information gap, something like: Watch a beginner use our step-by-step process...

Next, add a video. Why? You're dealing with such a visual medium (ART!) that giving away some valuable content is required here. Give a quick tutorial showing how to do some shading or something valuable that the visitor can follow along with and see the expertise and quality of your stuff.

3) Call to Action: Under the video, we want to have our strong call to action to kick our squeeze up a notch. You will want to experiment and really focus a lot of your attention on creating a strong call to action, but it will be something like:

Want to see more awesome tutorials and Photoshop Master Classes like this?

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• Photo-Manipulation
• Making portraits look out of this world
• Advanced retouching techniques
• Eye Popping characters
• And more...

4) Opt-In Form: Now add your opt-in form. Make the color stand out from the background with a sharp contrast. With that grey background you're using now, I would try a form that's orange or green to REALLY make it standout. And make your "submit" button more exciting. Change the text to "Give me Access" etc.

5) Post Opt-In: Lastly, I would add some testimonials here from the actual product, and add some sample images from inside the course so people can see the quality included. Under these testimonials, have another Opt-in form with similar Call-To-Action.

6) Extra Tips: GET RID OF THAT VISIT COUNTER!! It's ugly and unprofessional. Stick it back in the time machine it came from and send it back to the 1990's

The images you're using now are ads, but they don't lead anywhere... get rid of them. The only thing clickable on your squeeze page should be your submit button. I don't want to see them there any more

This might be controversial for other warriors, but I would also remove your affiliate link from this page. What do you want them to do? Click your affiliate link and risk losing them forever, or join your mailing list? I'd choose the mailing list every time.

Pay special attention to split-testing the following things:
Color of the opt-in form
Words in the headline
Phrasing in your CTA

Change each of these factors one at a time and measure which gets your more opt-ins. Always be testing. ALWAYS BE TESTING. ALWAYS BE TESTING!

Hope this helps! Shoot me a message if you want more help

ayman25

I'm really thankful for each word you wrote , your critque is outstanding!
thanks , i know i have so much to learn.

I did not want to put vidoes cuz i got a really bad impression about vidoes in general , i checked almost every product on click bank with 25+ gravity and most of these products are trash and their landing pages consists of a video and a buy button , the video of a noisy voice and poor design. I will look into making videos later on but for now i want to focus on improving my designing skills as i am doing everything my self so far. however, i added 1 GIF animatd photo .

I removed all the hyperlinks and i took your phrase for call to action just before the submit button , and the only link in the page is the 1 after submission , which will direct people to the offer link.

For the submission part i'm still a beginner adobe muse user i think i'll have to do more reserach on this to get it right , believe me i've spent over 3 hours for this part to make it work ~.~... worth it after all.


I couldn't find any testimonials on the link page and to be honest , most of the products that have testimonials i feel like people usually don't buy that , based on what would they believe those are true statments :X?.. but still if i have those i would put them in the website.

and im really sad to see that counter go , i used it for a while instead of google and now when i checked back i saw that google analystic is working lol.. thanks .

lastely i wanna confirm something ,
Is it the design ? that making my conversion rate 0?... cuz i've seen landing pages/squeez pages with all duo respect , pure trash.. that has nothing interesting at all , i don't wanna compare or anything but i think i'm not that bad , at least for a beginner .. i keep getting these thoughts about the product is not good enough or maybe 7search is giving me poor traffic..

but overall , i really appreciate everything you say , god bless you.

Thanks again.

NathanO

I primarily focus on a clickbank offer with a gravity of 100 or more.

ayman25

Yeah i might actually do that , thanks.

renhoek

I know what you mean, they piss me off too. But they work, they get optins. Do you want optins or to remain unpissed off

Bel66

I think the landingpage could be the problem. Maybe next time you can use ready to go landingpage sites for the creation. For example lander or similar services.

good luck

ayman25

Thanks guys! i'll change the landing page completely after finals, gonna spend some time on this and get back to you.

Much appreciated.