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Unread 27th Dec 2014, 01:14 PM   #1
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Hello, all I am new to how to make your website optimal and I have visitors going to my site but no one buying the product. Was wondering what I could do to improve on that. Any advice/criticism is welcome!

This is my website: http://www.mindwarriorllc.com/

Ps: Its also kind of interesting that their is a section on here titled Mind Warriors
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You need to move the written content up the page instead of having to scroll down to read it. You need to fix the numerous grammatical errors within your material (or have a proofreader/editor do it for you. (I am NOT saying this to get work).

You need more written content as well.

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Hi Joshua,
Most of your content including the products them selves are not visible after that page loads. You need to caputer the visitors attention when they land on your site. You might want to re think the design and add captivating head lines and videos about the products as well. Make sure you add call to action buttons on the site. Tell the visitor why their and convince them to stay, introduce them to the product, give them a captivating reason to buy, then educate them how to buy your product, and why they should by from you!
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Originally Posted by Joshua1000 View Post

Hello, all I am new to how to make your website optimal and I have visitors going to my site but no one buying the product. Was wondering what I could do to improve on that. Any advice/criticism is welcome!

This is my website: Nootropic | Mind enhancing supplements | Focus | Memory enhancement – MindWarrior

Ps: Its also kind of interesting that their is a section on here titled Mind Warriors
Although I have several suggestions, you're best off starting with one. So here's mine...

1. Look at what your competitors are doing.

If they're getting countless / up to date reviews and you can see who's buying what etc (firebox who are a gadget shop do a great job of this), then obviously they're doing something right.

It's going to take a lot more work than just buying an eCommerce related theme and sticking up a few products. It's definitely not "trust" worthy, so I seriously suggest you to look at your competitors.

"I have visitors going to my site". How many people are we talking? Are you using Google Analytics live feed to see where people are landing, for how long, what keywords they used to arrive to your page(s) and why they're leaving?

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Originally Posted by Shaolinsteve View Post

Although I have several suggestions, you're best off starting with one. So here's mine...

1. Look at what your competitors are doing.

If they're getting countless / up to date reviews and you can see who's buying what etc (firebox who are a gadget shop do a great job of this), then obviously they're doing something right.

It's going to take a lot more work than just buying an eCommerce related theme and sticking up a few products. It's definitely not "trust" worthy, so I seriously suggest you to look at your competitors.

"I have visitors going to my site". How many people are we talking? Are you using Google Analytics live feed to see where people are landing, for how long, what keywords they used to arrive to your page(s) and why they're leaving?
Hello, thank you for the advice I had Analytics but only where the people came from (site). I set up the Google Analytics and I hope it works it says sometimes it takes 24 hrs to start working? And what else would you suggest? Also, how could I make it more "trust" worthy? Any advice is great thank you for all your help so far!
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