florian992

hi!

do you have any tips for me? my landingpage do not generate any leads. i have much traffic on it but no lead.
what i'm doing wrong? any tips for me?
URL: www.7kamonth.net

thanks!
(i am new here - hope i have choosen the right topic)

RogozRazvan

Well, to be honest, you are violating a lot of copywriting rules.

1. Change 7k to something more specific.
2. Add proof or a reason why this works. They've heard this claim again and again.
3. Explain what they are actually getting.
4. Eliminate the “order today” part since it makes people think that it is NOT free.
5. Drop the white font on a black background. This is ALWAYS a bad thing to do.
6. Change your benefit / claim – the #1 secret is boooring and over-used. Instead, tell them the mechanism through which this is achieved.
7. Say what this video is about and how long it is.

That's about it for now. Make these tweaks and come back to tell us your results.

Best regards,
Razvan

PS: From where you get your traffic is also important.

florian992

thank you very much!!! very helpful!

i have made a few changes...hope this works better :-)

BudiT

Hi,

Actually, the design is not necessarily bad. But the first thing that I wanna ask is that, is this the only version you're using? If you're not, then you're definitely wasting clicks or money if you're using paid ads.

You need to optimize your squeeze pages non-stop, because an optimized squeeze page is worth more your time.

Be testing different elements in your squeeze pages. I always test headlines first. Then CTA, then design.

Apart from that, I just think that your squeeze pages is riddled with too many call to actions.

Hope that helps.

~ Budi T

yukon

The whole squeeze page is horrible. The copy blows. The background image is irrelevant & draws attention away from the call-to-action. Start over with something that's not spammy.

Rembo

Yukon is right; it makes a spammy (amateuristic) impression. There are hundreds of squeeze pages that promise a fortune in 5 minutes, that makes these type of pages suspicious by definition.

It is screaming "please click me" and it is all hype without substantial information about what the visitor can expect if he leaves his email address.

What kind of traffic is coming to your landing page? What are your visitors looking for? What problem are you solving for them?


Razvan makes a few very good points, spend some time working on these.

Here are my tips

• Get rid of the hype
• Add testimonials
• Add an exit script (always)

The do as Budi says; create several different versions of your landing page with different copy and different design and put them in a rotator script.



Test, test and then test some more. You need to know what it is that triggers your visitors to act.



I recommend you try and create a squeezepage that does not look like any other squeezepage in this niche.



How about an all white screen, some black text (keep it really short and to the point, centered horizontally on the page, 50px from the top) and a big bright yellow CTA button?


Then make one with an inverse coloring scheme. Try all that sort of variations in your design. Do note that colors and their associations are subject to culture for one thing so testing color schemes should be part of your optimizing process.



In my experience the squeezepages that are simple and stand out work the best. You want your CTA to jump out.



There's a ton of info on squeeze pages out there. Google is your friend.


Good luck!

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aidnul

Hello Rembo, what does this exit script mean?

jagmal

I think by exit script, Rembo meant a popup that shows up just before a user is about to exit.

If you are interested, you can try Exit Intent targeting at Connecto (http://www.connecto.io/connecto/bounce-rate/)

Founder, www.connecto.io

Daniel Thomas

Exit script is the pop-up that asks if you're sure you want to leave/close a web page. Or something similar -> don't know for sure as I haven't used them for some time now.

As for the LP, in my opinion it needs some major remake. The text is ***. You have highlighted Selling Sponsoring and No. This is not the way to do it! Make a better text and highlightthe advantages. Give some brief information about your system -> a bullet point list can do the job. The let your users to make guesses, instead tell them exactly what this is about.

C2A is not good as well. Your seal (100% absolutely free) is bigger than your C2A -> should be the other way around. You are overdoing it and it looks you are desperate: either put 100% Free OR Absolutely Free. Also the colors are wrong -> you have associated red, blue and yellow. My advice is search on google for call to action best practices and learn how to do it right.
Rembo and Razvan also provided you with a lot of useful information.
Bottom line man is learn and test!

Good luck!

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MrJeff

It sounds a little scammy. No selling, no recruiting, 100% if you can click a mouse. Nothing is free. you can make money by Free. Or perhaps your targeting the wrong audience. how and whee are you getting your visitors from?

Shaolinsteve

2 quick questions...

How are you getting traffic i.e. where is it coming from?

How much traffic are you getting? (much traffic doesn't say anything).

joelraitt

Everything above is bad advice.

- You should not be selling in this market, you don't know how to make 7k a month and it shows
- changing that number to $7,456.23 is not going to get you anywhere (someones advice above)
- the design 'isn't bad' but that doesn't matter, your copy and product sucks
- adding an exit script wont help you at all

Choose something you know at least a little bit about...

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commissionhero

I'm a very curious Person and even I won't bite.

Its all hyped up and nowhere to go...

Sorry pal its back to the drawing board for Ya.

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josuevalles

Hello florian92, the first thing you need to check out is your traffic source, where your traffic comes from? There is a chance that your traffic is in bad quality and non targeted.

Also, you need to check out if your traffic really want to see that kind of offer, relevance is the most important thing when it comes to conversion rate optimization.

If you're sure that your traffic is targeted, then you need to make some changes.

nexxterra

First, either remove the 100% from the heading or add Free...
Next, SCAM... that is what this yells, you ask for an action from the user and yet you do not inform them what they will need to do/agree to in order to get what you promised.
If your offer is legitimate, then WHY can you not tell us what we will be doing? You have made it clear we would need to do NOTHING to get rich, this is NEVER possible.
If you want clicks, tease the user a bit, what will they be doing? what skills will they need?... Make it about this and then the user can thing "hey, I can type, or wow, I have a facebook account with lots of friends"
You make very vague promises.

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iykeokolie

This sounds like the best advice you should go with especially the part that says you should choose a niche you know a little about. It saves you a whole lot of stress.

krisztinahereb

I do think they work, here's a great article on them: 7 Best Practices for Your Exit-Intent Popovers and Popups, in case you decided to give them a go

Andrea tang

Look like spammy to me. Rogoz‘s advice is good~ Change them,I am sure it will work when you optimzed them

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