Terry Papas

Hey guys, i was wondering if you could check my squeeze page and give me some feedback if you think it looks ok and if you think there's anything i can do to improve it for better conversions before i start sending traffic to it? The link is here

I'd really appreciate it if you could also check my OTO thank you page where new subscribers are directed after signing up. You can check it here
As you can see they have to click on another link first before they can read more about the premium/paid course. Do you think that's fine or should i put all the info in the thank you page instead?

Any feedback/suggestions are very welcome. Thanks in advance.

savidge4

All in all not bad... there is something "Off" with the first squeeze. I cant put my finger on it. the spacing at the top of the CTA, or the yellow CTA button, and then the eye lead over to the yellow hi-lited text. It really may not be any of that. its just off some where. ( One of those, I know there is something wrong, but... and then you end up married! hahaha )

kcbowman

It seems ok. You're using a really direct approach to everything in a take it or leave it manner. Which is fine.

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BudiT

The message looks fine. I think the problem is readability.

You might want to have your message more in their face.

Again, you have to test and tweak until it converts!

~ Budi T