14th Feb 2015, 07:34 PM | #1 |
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I guess this would be a good section to post this. I have a landing page for my company, I would like to get people's opinion on it. Thank you guys in advance atlanta.ultimateds.com |
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14th Feb 2015, 10:34 PM | #2 |
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It looks great! Eye catching, simple, readable, easy to navigate. My only suggestion is to make your testimonial look different than the other text at the bottom of the page to make it stand out a little bit.
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14th Feb 2015, 11:23 PM | #3 |
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Is responsive, cool design, fast loading. I like it ! But what's with that White text with clouds in the back? Change that. Use for that text the same reddish color you have in the header ( the exact same one ) . Or something else that will create the proper contrast. Hope this helps, cheers |
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15th Feb 2015, 02:26 AM | #4 | |
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just overly blah... think about this. people want a page created. they are excited about the project.. they have vision, they have drive, they are looking for that perfect match to bring their baby to life.. and then they land on your page. I seriously think its a let down. When you get a chance... look at the upcity list. load up some of your competitors.. y'all look a like. everything is muted and b/w and blah... break the mold. look up other upcity listings like Seattle ( Gravitate is pretty cool ) and LA and Denver and NYC. they all resemble one another in each community. its like each city has their own identity. Lets look at your 3 bullet points for a moment.. you are listed in the top 50 upcity list. Ok I knew what it is.. I know its a big deal.. most people will probably be shocked there are 50 web designers in Atlanta.. you are giving them an option to find your competitors. - really not good when you look at it that way. we are ranked #1.... that's great if you mentioned that you are a web design and SEO firm. I will bet this point is not mentioned in the traffic draw to this page as well. not a good match I would say. We provide amazing design and fab customer service. I seriously do not consider being "Best" a bullet point. ALL THREE BULLET POINTS are talking about YOU. isn't this what you can do for your CLIENTS? I am going to be straight up blunt. after looking at your site, and seeing you have done more than a decent amount of work. I would grade this lander an F. Poorly executed. Poor delivery of message. poor imaging. typos all over the place. Poor call to action... "TAKE YOUR BUSINESS TO THE NEXT LEVEL!" really? LOL you have some work to do. | |
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16th Feb 2015, 10:22 AM | #5 |
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The landing page looks really good. The only thing I would take off is the phone number that you have on top. |
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23rd Feb 2015, 11:25 PM | #7 |
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I'd like to know what are some of the difference with a wordpress theme to use to create a landing/squeeze page vr's using a wordpress plugin to do it. What do you use and why do you use it the way you do. Also, why don't you do it the other way? Or do you use both? I mean, could you use a wordpress theme that is specifically designed to build a wordpress landing/squeeze page WITH a wordpress plugin that ALSO builds landing/squeeze pages? Well any help on this topic would be very very useful as I am about to begin doing this. I have hosting and a url and am about to get an auto-responder going this week. |
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23rd Feb 2015, 11:50 PM | #8 | |
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The short answer to your question... I personally will duplicate a themes "full width" template. remove the header and footer details. then I make the body of the page transparent ( so the background image shows covering the whole page ) and use columns shortcode to place my elements such as text, video and optin-box. If you didn't understand a word of what was said above... which is fine, hardly anyone using wordpress is a programmer. I would use a plugin. Hope that Helps!
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24th Feb 2015, 09:43 PM | #9 |
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Thank you guys for all of your feedback. We were doing some A/B Testing and we will know begin to do some changes to our page and take into consideration your opinions.I am a web designer and just about a year ago I start getting into the whole digital marketing situation so I'm learning as I go. It definitely helps to have you guys. |
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24th Feb 2015, 09:48 PM | #10 | |
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In the other hand if you really want to learn HTML and CSS I would build the landing page from scratch, it might take longer but you are learning something. | |
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24th Feb 2015, 09:59 PM | #11 |
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It looks really good. There are no major or even minor critiques I have of it.
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2nd Mar 2015, 08:55 AM | #12 |
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It looks good I suggest to reduce black color police and make your logo in the title bar |
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I am also interested in this topic. So what kind of plugin do you mean? I don't know even what to search after reading your explanation. So you mean plugin for adding text or other elements on the picture? Or what? | |
3rd Mar 2015, 02:02 PM | #14 | |
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A plug-in as in a squeeze page plug-in: https://wordpress.org/plugins/search.php?q=squeeze+page | |
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3rd Mar 2015, 02:57 PM | #15 |
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| Proof read everything: this jumped at me; you might have more: WHAT ARE CLIENTS HAVE TO SAY! You need better reasons: you being named top 50 of something doesn't do much for me. You making a website that gets 235% better conversions than the one I have does a lot more for me than any of the 3 reasons in your bullet points. |
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Offer them something for free. Being intrigued about "take your business to the next level" is not enough. Try "Get a free situation analysis."
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I agree with a lot of the posters before me. Your list of reasons of why to do business with your company sounds like you are bragging about how great your company. I think you should change the list to identify the top problems your company is solving for its potential customers. Also, your call to action 'Click here' button is not very compelling. I think you could provide a free report that your target customer will find value in as an incentive to join your list where you will have better opportunities to convert the prospect into a buying customer. Hope that helps. |
10th Mar 2015, 09:25 AM | #18 |
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Thank you guys for your continuing feedback. It seems there is mix feelings as far as design. Some of you really like it and some of you have minor design suggestions. The problem seem to be the content, CTA, etc. We are already addressing this issues. This is why its important to A/B test and get second opinions. Thanks guys. |
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10th Mar 2015, 09:12 PM | #19 |
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When you make an SEO statement... it had better be true... yours is not. I checked from 6 different access locations other than Atlanta.. and your statement is 100% false. your attempt at a USP is far to similar to who is in #1 Atlanta Web Design unless you are going to say that is you. |
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It looks good, good design, nice headlines, simple opt in form. But your customers critique is the best critique, place some plugin like "How would you rate our services" "Our website" Etc, then you will have the exact info on what needs to be changed. Best regards, CPA Beyond |
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