What Do You Think Of My Landing Page?

wadevanlaius · 1st May 2015, 10:53 AM

Hi, all. I just launched and didn't have many visitors yet, so there are no reliable numbers. But if I have any obvious mistakes, this is your chance to rub my nose in them :-). I'm curious to your feedback.

savidge4 · 1st May 2015, 12:50 PM

Nice simple to the point. looks good!

Shaolinsteve · 1st May 2015, 04:28 PM

Should be a good base to start testing with. I'm also using OptimizePress with my List Building Membership Site. But I have numerous of custom squeeze pages also as those convert well too.

Start getting some traffic to it, such as 200-500 click solo ads if you have the budget and start testing!

Pahomas · 2nd May 2015, 01:47 PM

If you decide to use social buttons like Google+ and Twitter to be visible, then it is the only external source for a visitor to judge if it's worth downloading. "0" stats never looks well and you shouldn't count that they will be first. Nobody likes to be first, we rather like other people to try something, so then we could make a decision. As Asch's experiment shows, we're extreme conformists.

I have a story when I went to a florist to buy a flowers for my girlfriend having board game in hand. The lady from the flower shop with whom I was chatting for a while, couldn't believe my decision of buying this game was based on description of this game and its rules but NOT on my friend's reviews (!).

So I would consider some clicks from your 'friends'.

federal06 · 2nd May 2015, 04:37 PM

Look Very Good Brother (Simple and Elegant to do the Job)

Romeo90 · 3rd May 2015, 04:16 AM

Looks fairly simple and straightforward, I hope you are split testing with different copy/layouts etc?

Carlos Stratton · 3rd May 2015, 05:12 AM

Only split test, track and optimize to see the results for yourself.

wadevanlaius · 4th May 2015, 12:11 AM

Yes, I have another copy. Not quite so pretty but we'll See which performs Vetter.

Sean DeSilva · 6th May 2015, 05:41 PM

Overall, good job! I do you think you could improve the framing a little bit:

"3 simple online jobs anyone can make a nice side income from"

"3 simple ways to make an extra $1,200 in your spare time online"

Badassbro · 12th May 2015, 04:33 PM

Add a "without"..

without having to...

dhiraj192 · 12th May 2015, 04:49 PM

Personally I like to know what exactly I'll get in my in box when I enter my email. What will I get instant access to? Is it a report? A video?
Also I find the box a little confusing. What has a free 3 day email series got to do with the main thrust - 3 online jobs?
Also could be centered instead of mainly over to the right. Hopefully, constructive criticism.

eliteimagesoftware · 12th May 2015, 05:10 PM

It is good and attractive really like it to the point also .Great work done by you .Keep it up

CPABeyondNetwork · 13th May 2015, 03:56 PM

It looks good.. But You should split test with different headlines, different colors, etc.. To see which one performs best.

Best regards,

CPA Beyond

bdwebdeveloper · 13th Jul 2015, 02:23 AM

Should be Fully Responsive. And Quick Loading. Just Simple

1st May 2015, 10:53 AM	#1
wadevanlaius Warrior Member Join Date: 2015 Posts: 22 Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	What Do You Think Of My Landing Page? Share on: Hi, all. I just launched and didn't have many visitors yet, so there are no reliable numbers. But if I have any obvious mistakes, this is your chance to rub my nose in them :-). I'm curious to your feedback.

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2nd May 2015, 01:47 PM	#4
Pahomas Warrior Member Join Date: 2015 Posts: 8 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: What Do You Think Of My Landing Page? Share on: If you decide to use social buttons like Google+ and Twitter to be visible, then it is the only external source for a visitor to judge if it's worth downloading. "0" stats never looks well and you shouldn't count that they will be first. Nobody likes to be first, we rather like other people to try something, so then we could make a decision. As Asch's experiment shows, we're extreme conformists. I have a story when I went to a florist to buy a flowers for my girlfriend having board game in hand. The lady from the flower shop with whom I was chatting for a while, couldn't believe my decision of buying this game was based on description of this game and its rules but NOT on my friend's reviews (!). So I would consider some clicks from your 'friends'.

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wadevanlaius Warrior Member Join Date: 2015 Posts: 22 Thanks: 1 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: What Do You Think Of My Landing Page? Share on: Yes, I have another copy. Not quite so pretty but we'll See which performs Vetter.

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12th May 2015, 05:10 PM	#12
eliteimagesoftware Warrior Member Join Date: 2015 Location: Canada Posts: 21 Thanks: 14 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts	Re: What Do You Think Of My Landing Page? Share on: It is good and attractive really like it to the point also .Great work done by you .Keep it up

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