9th May 2015, 09:26 PM | #1 |
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Hai there , I just revamp my landing page. Please give me some opinion. Is on the IM niche and I know it is a bit green. Internet Income Program Thank you in advance |
10th May 2015, 01:13 AM | #2 |
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For the bullet information, try and rewrite the points as so: "Free article about Making Money Online" "Save Tons of Time and Money Starting Your Business" "Build a Business That is Long Term!" "A 4 Simple Step Guide That Will Help You Start Your Business" "You Will Have The Knowledge and Power of a 10 Year Veteran on Your Side!" |
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10th May 2015, 01:24 AM | #3 |
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Hi Mate, According to my opinion! Color is not much Appeal and bulleted points can be highlighted more. And you can make subscription form little big size. Hope this helps you. Thanks |
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10th May 2015, 01:28 AM | #4 |
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Thanks a lot for the help guys. The reword and size is a helpful tips. My English is quite poor since I use too much manglish (english + mandarin), |
10th May 2015, 05:27 AM | #5 |
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I think your page looks good, the only thing that "bothers" me is that you say "financial freedom in just 4 simple steps" and then you go ahead and share a list with 8 bullets. I'd say you should probably say "financial freedom in just A FEW simple steps", or list those 4 steps without going into detail, so you avoid any kind of confusion.
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10th May 2015, 09:59 AM | #6 |
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Would love to see the optin above the fold (so there is no scrolling down)... And just having the email has always worked better for conversions (less to fill in). |
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10th May 2015, 07:05 PM | #7 |
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I like it. What's your opt-in rate for it?
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10th May 2015, 07:07 PM | #8 |
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11th May 2015, 09:46 AM | #9 |
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Thank you all for still in my thread. I do agree less to fill in will have better conversion. However, I do ask for first name so that I could get more personal touch with my customer. I just started to my ads campaign from some cheaper advertiser (I have limited budget especially due to the currency exchange). But they are definitely from the IM niche. So far there is about 30+ clicks and none conversion yet. I still accept opinions and I try to update my conversions. Thanks for all the support once again. |
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