26th May 2015, 09:59 AM | #1 |
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Hallo WR! I need any feedback to my landingpage site BONUS REPORT! How To Increase Your Commissions By 200% |
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26th May 2015, 01:03 PM | #2 |
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It is a nice page! maybe it need to show other details. Anyway you can test with another alternative! |
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26th May 2015, 02:16 PM | #3 |
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Hi Loo1, Nice page mate. The only thing I wasnt sure about was: "Enter Your Best Email Here" Not sure if the word Best is needed, although there may be some benefit of having it there. |
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26th May 2015, 10:26 PM | #4 | |
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Your page is overall good but I think that you should share some more information in this page in order to get sign ups. | |
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"Discover how to increase your commissions by 200%" what commissions? Affiliate commissions? ( I know its on the artwork cover.. but that's not the point ) Why discover? why not ( test ) "Increase Your Affiliate Commission by 200%" | |
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28th May 2015, 09:00 AM | #6 |
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Hi! As for me, your landing page looks pretty good. Though I'd make the main layer a bit wider and less higher, because scrolling appears at my 1366x768 screen, and call-to-action button is not visible on first screen (I have to scroll for to see and click it). Good luck and high conversions! ,) |
28th May 2015, 03:52 PM | #7 | |
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The sub-title under your eBook cover is non readable. I'm not sure what the point of having it if you're unable to read it. Special Bonus... don't use that. It doesn't make sense. Discover how to increase your commissions by 200%. I would personally take an interest if you offered a case study and not a how to. If you've personally done this yourself then an exact figure like 172% would also work better, but again... that depends whether or not you have done this yourself. After opt-in... Don't attach the PDF in the email. Send them to a page because you can take a lot more advantage by doing this. You're welcome email is non existent. It's straight to the point but... again you can certainly do a lot more with it. Now... you left a link to a product page but... you're promoting Affiliate Marketing Blueprint again. The cover is exactly the same as the squeeze page, so in my mind... if I've just got this report, then it appears as though you're promoting the same thing, but now you're putting a price on it. So... you've got to make this more clear. There's a lot of work to do, but test and trial everything. | |
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28th May 2015, 04:03 PM | #8 |
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Not to be mean but... Looks like all the others, offers no credibility, offers a repetitive product. For example, your customer probably sees 10+ sites offering an ebook similar to yours, so yours will likely just end up in a pile of books that never even get read, or opened, and that's if they even get downloaded. On its own your landing page would be perfect, but when your customer sees 10+ identical looking pages, you're not likely to get their attention at all. If they sign to your email list, assuming they did on other sites, you're in a pile of emails, with no pre-established relationship or credibility. What are the chances a person is going to go through all this, and you'll still command their attention? Again, on its own in, say 1999, it would've been perfect. Today it's just a needle in a haystack. |
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28th May 2015, 04:09 PM | #9 |
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I think it's nice - the only thing bothering me is that the Cover mixes a little bit with the background...you know - dark on dark background. Needs a little bit of contrast. Otherwise good.
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28th May 2015, 04:16 PM | #10 |
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Nice, should be effective.
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29th May 2015, 09:19 AM | #11 |
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Did you tried to split test it?Have you analyzed the LP of your competitors?Are you offering value?Try to answer those questions they are going to be useful!
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30th May 2015, 05:58 AM | #12 |
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It is nice one but the background black color can be improved with some another impressive color.
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30th May 2015, 09:09 AM | #13 |
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That report and landing page looks very familiar I'd like to see everything above the fold so that there is no scrolling whatsoever... Make the user experience slightly easier. |
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3rd Jun 2015, 12:11 AM | #14 |
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dude thats one fine LP which theme did you use? |
3rd Jun 2015, 02:47 AM | #15 |
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Assuming your pre-sell before directing your visitors / prospects to that landing page is good, here's what I recommend in terms of the website design for your landing page. Dim the background more so that there would be more focus on the foreground. Use a more specific number such as 273% instead of 200% (of course, make sure the number is indeed still in line with what you have in your book) |
3rd Jun 2015, 04:50 AM | #16 |
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6th Jun 2015, 12:14 AM | #17 |
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Hi Dude, This squeeze page is fancy & eye catching but i suggest that make it more professional. Pl check mine also I will appreciate your comments. Free Vedio for Nikhil’s Subscribers |
7th Jun 2015, 01:31 PM | #18 |
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You could make the box that contains the text a brighter color so it doesn't blend into the background so much. I would also get rid of the "special bonus" text since it is a stand alone lead magnet. Maybe add no more than 3 bullet points that highlight some additional benefits to the user. Why not add a tesimonial(if you have them) to the bottom of the page? These are just a few ideas. |
9th Jun 2015, 11:47 AM | #19 |
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How did you create this type of squeezepage? very good...
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10th Jun 2015, 09:56 AM | #20 | |
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This would be more of a salespage instead of a squeeze page type of design. His is actually good, yes it may need a bit of a contrast, the faded background is a plus. I would personaly prefer to go for video preview pages with a 2 step optin. Thanks, Diogo de Castro | |
10th Jun 2015, 05:41 PM | #21 |
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It will help if you have some social or video proof.
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11th Jun 2015, 11:04 AM | #22 |
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nice web, but why not a video presentation,sensational video, somebody can make for a little money in fiverr
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13th Jun 2015, 08:13 AM | #23 |
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I would split test... Optin vs Reverse Optin in... Direct Pitch vs Indirect Pitch Your follow up email will tell the difference... But here's M2C... I agree with someone earlier that it's a generic template and everyone is selling the same box with the same tactics to make the "most money with little to no work." If this is something that you're just starting, I'd suggest to build your USP and reframe your pitch to something that you personally discovered... Make that thought / idea stand out in the copy. - you can test this approach. Next... Check your engagement rates in the follow up email. If you're losing engagement within a week - chances are you're traffic / lead quality is low. |
28th Jun 2015, 11:43 PM | #24 |
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Simple but attractive. Hope you get good number of conversion promoting this. |
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30th Jun 2015, 03:37 AM | #25 |
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Thx for all here in some have write my post I well now split test my site!
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24th Jul 2015, 06:18 PM | #26 |
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Agree with some of the other users in this thread, it needs some more contrast to it. The grey background combined with the black box, just doesn't invite me in. I would also reconsider the background image with the money, it screams "GET RICH QUICK" scam imo. Hope it's useful to you, and good luck:-) |
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14th Aug 2015, 09:46 AM | #27 |
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Add a credibility element, preferably testimonial. Huge claim, not backed up with proof or reason why. It is a copywriting 101 basic mistake. |
21st Aug 2015, 02:59 AM | #28 |
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I entered my email.. I wanna see what happens next
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21st Aug 2015, 03:00 AM | #29 |
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How do you get people to Land on your Landing page?
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21st Aug 2015, 05:30 AM | #30 |
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The main purpose of any landingpage is just to trigger the curiosity of your visitors, so much that they might optin for more information. And your page actually appeared to be interesting and attractive in my first impression. So I think it may work very well as a squeeze page. Good luck! |
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21st Aug 2015, 07:41 AM | #31 |
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I was also confused by the best email part. Other wise it looks awesome and think it will work. I would however suggest that you created a second similar landing page with maybe a different call to action just to do some A/B split testing
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24th Aug 2015, 06:32 AM | #32 |
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If mobile users reach this page they will click away because it is not mobile responsive.
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24th Aug 2015, 04:29 PM | #33 |
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I just had a quick look, you should have your submit button above the fold.
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14th Sep 2015, 03:33 AM | #34 |
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nice page. can you give some feed back on my page - online shop website. . I know that I need to improve something on its design.
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I like the design.
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nice and simple, it's perfect!
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