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Unread 2nd Jul 2015, 03:52 PM   #1
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Tear My Sales Page Apart - Dog Training
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Just finished this sales page. Had help with the copy and used a template that I customized a bit. Can you give me feedback on things I can improve or that you think need to be changed?


- I know the videos aren't up yet
- I know the Join Now buttons arn't set up as well

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I think at this point anyone could nit pick the thing apart... its easy to do sitting way over here in a chair looking at it.

I would suggest getting 100+ and more closer to 1000 or so impressions over the page and see where it stands. In this first set of impressions I would also suggest a heat map tracker to get a good idea if people are clicking on things, how far down the page they are going, is the scroll progress interrupted ( are they scrolling back up the page for any reason )

This process is just going to take a lot of the guess work out figuring out what could be better, is this a case that shorter may be better ( something I would test for sure ) are they hesitating on the buy now button ( the price is present but set in text ) Is the headline not drawing them down the page, are there to many testimonials. all of this over time would could and should be tested for optimal results.

I can say from a quick view it looks ok, a bit long I think. It didn't really grab me anywhere ( but I don't have a dog ) I saw lots of potential test points - but this all rides on how the page as it stands performs. At the very least you need a benchmark to start playing with it.

Best of luck with this project.

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