savvyimedia

Hi Warriors,

I have 2 landing pages that I have created for my digital product. Please let me know some ways I can improve on it. You are welcome to be as harsh as you can lol

The Investment Banking Bible
Landing Original — The Investment Banking Bible

Thanks,

KyleChapman

The one with the big picture of the guy - It says I get "tools and resources" if I give you my info and click download. What exactly are these tools and resources? I think being a little more specific here could help.

Also, the giant picture of the guy doesn't really provide any value (unless people hitting this page know who he is already - like some sort of celebrity in this realm or something). I'm not saying that having his picture is bad, I'm just saying that space could be used to "sell" me a little on why I should sign up.

Hope this helps a little!

I've done conversion work for many big companies such as Expedia, The Boston Globe, Kobo Books, Firestone and more...

Kyle Chapman - CEO - Conversion Marketing Services a Conversion Rate Optimization Firm

Enfusia

Hi.

On: The Investment Banking Bible
The layout is not conducive to getting leads. Your two headlines the other one being in your opt in box and your sub head don't make any big promises.

Then you're selling it down below. This is confusing at best.

Your headlines just don't interest me.
You need to give me a reason to care about what you have on the page.

Next:
http://investment-banking-bible.com/landing-original/

Same thing here. The copy is dead. It doesn't make me want your offer. Plus, I don't really know what your offer is.

Patrick

savvyimedia

What would be a good layout?

Enfusia

I just sent you a PM with one of my squeeze pages in a link.

Have a look.

Patrick