Feedback on free & paid landing pages

kevinkt · 12th Oct 2015, 03:40 AM

I have a free Instagram growth hacking course

Free Instagram "Growth Hack" Course | Get more Instagram followers

Which funnels into my paid premium course

Instagram Explosion | The Formula I Used to Get More than 200k Real Followers

Would love any feedback at all on these 2 pages. Thanks a bunch in advance guys.

time4vps · 16th Oct 2015, 07:31 AM

The first one is excelent!

In the second example I would change ORDER NOW button place, I would add it above the video, just to make sure user see it clearly. Another thing - testimonials, I would put it the footer. Morover, the info is logical, but these days people are tired of long text, so you could segment all that info and close some of them. It could be automaticly opened if people click on narrow button. Because this isn't user friendly for mobile users and it overhealms the head.

Overall, missing some social links, this would be wise to add them somewhere.

ShoppingSignals · 5th Nov 2015, 07:46 AM

Very nice job on both of them Kevin. On the premium course page, you might consider changing Emily Tang's name to Emily T. My first thought was... "that's probably his sister or wife...of course she likes it!".

I don't mind all of the text. Most of it is easily readable and scannable. There are a couple of paragraphs that could be broken up, but overall pretty good.

galiciya · 6th Nov 2015, 04:09 AM

Hi! I've some thoughts.

Free landing pages:
- add more reviews about your course. Only one review is not enough for 100% trust.
- one element cover to another. See screenshot Screenshot by Lightshot

Paid landing pages:
- too many information.

kamikaza · 8th Nov 2015, 11:39 AM

First page looks awesome, you may want to split test call to action text (i.e. "let me in")

On your sales page I would advice to place some kind of scarcity factor. Like a countdown timer to increase conversions.

Also it's kinda it's kinda weird .. on the sales page you advertise both - the product (software?) and some kind of course . I believe that your sales page should focus only on one thing - your main product. You can offer your course on Exit Pop Up for example

12th Oct 2015, 03:40 AM	#1
kevinkt Warrior Member Join Date: 2010 Posts: 20 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts	Feedback on free & paid landing pages Share on: I have a free Instagram growth hacking course Free Instagram "Growth Hack" Course \| Get more Instagram followers Which funnels into my paid premium course Instagram Explosion \| The Formula I Used to Get More than 200k Real Followers Would love any feedback at all on these 2 pages. Thanks a bunch in advance guys.
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16th Oct 2015, 07:31 AM	#2
time4vps VPS Hosting War Room Member Join Date: 2013 Location: Lithuania Posts: 312 Thanks: 3 Thanked 41 Times in 39 Posts Blog Entries: 1	Re: Feedback on free & paid landing pages Share on: The first one is excelent! In the second example I would change ORDER NOW button place, I would add it above the video, just to make sure user see it clearly. Another thing - testimonials, I would put it the footer. Morover, the info is logical, but these days people are tired of long text, so you could segment all that info and close some of them. It could be automaticly opened if people click on narrow button. Because this isn't user friendly for mobile users and it overhealms the head. Overall, missing some social links, this would be wise to add them somewhere.
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5th Nov 2015, 07:46 AM	#3
ShoppingSignals HyperActive Warrior Join Date: 2013 Posts: 155 Thanks: 7 Thanked 47 Times in 44 Posts	Re: Feedback on free & paid landing pages Share on: Very nice job on both of them Kevin. On the premium course page, you might consider changing Emily Tang's name to Emily T. My first thought was... "that's probably his sister or wife...of course she likes it!". I don't mind all of the text. Most of it is easily readable and scannable. There are a couple of paragraphs that could be broken up, but overall pretty good.
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6th Nov 2015, 04:09 AM	#4
galiciya Warrior Member Join Date: 2015 Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Feedback on free & paid landing pages Share on: Hi! I've some thoughts. Free landing pages: - add more reviews about your course. Only one review is not enough for 100% trust. - one element cover to another. See screenshot Screenshot by Lightshot Paid landing pages: - too many information.

8th Nov 2015, 11:39 AM	#5
kamikaza Active Warrior Join Date: 2011 Posts: 68 Thanks: 8 Thanked 14 Times in 11 Posts	Re: Feedback on free & paid landing pages Share on: First page looks awesome, you may want to split test call to action text (i.e. "let me in") On your sales page I would advice to place some kind of scarcity factor. Like a countdown timer to increase conversions. Also it's kinda it's kinda weird .. on the sales page you advertise both - the product (software?) and some kind of course . I believe that your sales page should focus only on one thing - your main product. You can offer your course on Exit Pop Up for example