18th Jan 2016, 12:05 AM | #1 |
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Anything major sticking out that you would change? Designed it my self so looking for all feedback to improve it more. BrightDog Academy — BrightDog |
18th Jan 2016, 07:01 AM | #2 |
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More Buy buttons. You only have one. Give people multiple chances to buy in the copy. Now, of even more importance than your site, its layout & copy, is your traffic source(s). |
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6th Feb 2016, 10:03 AM | #3 |
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Use some attractive font at the top of site. You can use small sized alphabets for an attractive site at the top. Remaining all things are fine. |
6th Feb 2016, 08:03 PM | #4 |
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You've done a nice job with that. Personally, I think this would be a little easier to get through it if: - Fewer text sizes - More consistency in spacing and justification The heading is a bit much. I would consider a shorter version. Lastly, I don't know if it is just my machine or not, but the exit popover requires me to scroll down to view the Yes send me button. And when clicking it, takes me to another page with what appears is the same thing, requiring me to click the same button again, then I get a popover to opt in. That first exit popover, that should contain the optin form. Hope this helps. Good luck! |
22nd Feb 2016, 11:25 AM | #5 |
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It looks good to me, but I would increase the font size in the body a little.
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23rd Feb 2016, 07:56 AM | #6 |
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You have BIG HeadLine! Try to make it shorter and Crispier ! You need to add more Call To Action (CTA)! Try to tell a story to visually and through graphics instead of long paragraph. Your website load time is about 5.3 sec. and page size is 4.9 MB. You can work on it and decrease page size and improve loading time! Your website doesn't look good on iPad and iphone. P.S. I have critically reviewed your website ; This will help you in improving it. |
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23rd Feb 2016, 11:11 AM | #7 |
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1. There is an image at the top of the page that doesn'l load. 2. Why do you have a popup that covers your sales page? You should focus on only one major call to action per page. Do you want the email capture, or do you want to make sales? 3. Even if you keep the popup, you shouldn't have an autoplay video behind it. People can't listen to the autoplay video and read the popup text at the same time. 4. Your web page loads extremely slow. Pingdom says it takes over 7 seconds to load. This is very bad. You need to optimize your page to load much faster. You can find guides for speed optimization techniques by searching for them. Google has said in the past that any page that takes more than 1-2 seconds to load will cause visitors to start leaving because they are impatient. 5. As others have mentioned, your headline is too long. People need to be able to read your headline in the first 1-2 seconds they are on the page, in order for it to instantly capture their attention. Try shortening it to something like "How to Train Your Dog in 7 Days or Less" or something just as snappy. 6. Your text starting with "Former President Of The American Veterinary" has some sort of rendering error. 7. Under your testimonial videos you also have more text with render errors. 8. I didn't read your copy but glanced over it and it looks pretty solid. However, at the end you ask the customer to pay $37/month for a training program, but in the headline you claim that they will "See results within 7 days". In my mind there's a big disconnect between the claim that they will see fast results but also the fact that they will be expected to pay a monthly fee. Why would they pay for monthly membership if the results are supposed to come in 7 days? Overall, your sales page looks pretty solid, it just needs these minor corrections I mentioned. However, there's no telling how it will perform until you test it with real traffic. Good luck. |
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