responsivelp

Hi All,


Let me know suggestions regarding landing page designs. Your suggestions are highly appreciated.

Wile E Coyote

I personally think you need to re-think your entire business.

Seriously... you're offering landing page design services and you have a conversion problem.

Boost your Traffic, Conversion & Revnue is at the top of your site.

People (not specifically you btw) get this idea that CRO is like math. You get an A+B+C+D equation and it always equals success.

This is the exact opposite of what CRO actually is. Bob's Shingles & Co. may work entirely differently than Jim's Sandwich shop.

One of your biggest issues on your page is that there is no clear direction you have them going to.

You have the following headlines/choices they can make:
1. Get a Free Quote
2. Sale
3. Custom Design Service
4. HTML Website Template
5. Website Template PSD
6. PPV LP
7. Responsive LP
8. Landing Page Design
9. Download Landing Page Design Templates

This is all above the fold, and is very distracting... continuing down the page...

10. Website Design
11. Banner Design
12. Landing Page Design (again)
13. Logo Design
14. Responsive HTML5/CSS3
15. Email Creative Design
16. View all Services (like you don't have enough already?)
17. Get a Free Quote (again)

It doesn't feel like you really know what a landing page consists of. To the simpliest extent, think of an internet marketing squeeze page. These pages are over simplified but have a single concrete purpose.

If you're driving traffic to a page, you have to have a single concrete purpose on your site.

Get rid of the clutter and build up a page that is focused on a single element, that makes sense (for example, if I hired you to make me a landing page and it wasn't responsive I'd kill you personally). Most of the stuff on your page is fluff. Trim the fat, re-focus your ideas and come back with something else.

ABN

I second Wile E Coyote's response.

In short, you have too much going on. There is a science to how the mind processes information. People are overwhelmed easily when there's too many options. Each of your services has to have it own landing page, focused specifically on it in a short, concise manner with very few options... mostly geared to what action you want them to take.

Good luck!

Mark Singletary

Besides the other excellent suggestions, you need to understand that persuading people to do something (whatever action the landing page is shooting for) requires excellent language skills. Your sales page is full of grammatical errors that would be very off-putting to any potential customer.

Good luck with getting it figured out.

Mark

RogozRazvan

All of the above suggestions are excellent but I think that we need to answer a key question.

"What does the market wants?".

You are offering rather generic LPs. I have a far larger selection on sites like themeforest.com for 25 - 50% of your price. You are offering an inferior product at a higher price than the market average.

This may work, when you have credibility and authority but I don't think it is the case here. So before focusing on CRO, I'd focus on delivering products that can actually compete with what is out there.

oam1987

Too many information on landing page at times are confusing, most of my landing page are single page view with no room to for the user to scroll.

I've tried it several times and it's working for me like a joker.

Simonseed

It is not opening. I've tried many times but couldn't see anything.