Newbie here, need some good сritique

vaho · 20th Jun 2016, 10:23 AM

Hi there!

I am a programmer who is rather new to sales. During my programming career I had few occasional customers who ordered custom (in terms of functionality) landing pages. I assumed then there are some more people on the market who could potentially want the same (some part of functionality in their landing pages which would better show what product is going to do etc.).

I set a landing page for that CraftedLandings - Custom landing pages in just one click (rather humble) and lead some of Google Ads traffic by keywords similar to `custom landing pages`. After some time I got reasonable amount if clicks (comparing to ads view number), but none converted to a sell/question/etc.

Could You suggest what am I doing wrong here, what could be improved? Do I need to look for a person to optimize my page, write more content there etc?

Thanks

binelus · 20th Jun 2016, 10:33 AM

Originally Posted by vaho

Hi there!

I am a programmer who is rather new to sales. During my programming career I had few occasional customers who ordered custom (in terms of functionality) landing pages. I assumed then there are some more people on the market who could potentially want the same (some part of functionality in their landing pages which would better show what product is going to do etc.).

I set a landing page for that CraftedLandings - Custom landing pages in just one click (rather humble) and lead some of Google Ads traffic by keywords similar to `custom landing pages`. After some time I got reasonable amount if clicks (comparing to ads view number), but none converted to a sell/question/etc.

Could You suggest what am I doing wrong here, what could be improved? Do I need to look for a person to optimize my page, write more content there etc?

Thanks

Some if what you wrote is not very clear. You might want to retype that.

But from what I'm understanding, are you targeting only that keyword phrase you mentioned?

vaho · 20th Jun 2016, 11:10 AM

Originally Posted by binelus

Some if what you wrote is not very clear. You might want to retype that.

But from what I'm understanding, are you targeting only that keyword phrase you mentioned?

1) What exactly is not clear? I am not a native speaker, so You may be right

2) Not this only keyword, but a bunch of similar to this one like `high converting landing pages`, `landing page creator` etc. Google ads was to be experiment only, but no conversion (even Fivver questions) with ~ 50 clicks - is that fine? Do I need to try more?

Mark Singletary · 20th Jun 2016, 01:37 PM

No offense but the English needs to be improved if you are targeting an English speaking audience. That is an immediate turn off for many visitors who will immediately leave once they see mistakes.

Mark

vaho · 23rd Jun 2016, 09:21 AM

Thank You guys for your comments, I realised that the biggest issue in my case is lack of content on my landing page, so I am working at it now.

Still I am interested how do You feel about this kind of service? Can it be interesting to potential clients? As I told already I am new to this niche and I will be thankful for any sort of advice as I go on ;)

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Mark Singletary VIP Warrior War Room Member Join Date: 2002 Location: Over Yonder Posts: 3,857 Thanks: 3,356 Thanked 5,362 Times in 2,546 Posts Blog Entries: 1	Re: Newbie here, need some good сritique Share on: No offense but the English needs to be improved if you are targeting an English speaking audience. That is an immediate turn off for many visitors who will immediately leave once they see mistakes. Mark

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vaho Warrior Member Join Date: 2016 Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Newbie here, need some good сritique Share on: Thank You guys for your comments, I realised that the biggest issue in my case is lack of content on my landing page, so I am working at it now. Still I am interested how do You feel about this kind of service? Can it be interesting to potential clients? As I told already I am new to this niche and I will be thankful for any sort of advice as I go on ;)