23rd Aug 2014, 09:23 AM
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|  Please Give Feedback On My First Squeeze Page
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Hi All, I am new to AM and making squeeze page. Please do feedback on the things I need to improve on my first squeeze page. Thanks! Grow Taller |
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23rd Aug 2014, 12:38 PM
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Being Short SUCKS! Discover How You Could Be At Least 2-4 Inches Taller In 8 Weeks! | |
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23rd Aug 2014, 02:11 PM
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First of all, your English is a problem so that is something you will need to get checked by someone. But who is going to believe that you can grow 4 inches taller in 8 weeks? It's totally unbelievable and has scam written all over it. The bullet points don't work and there are inconsistencies in your copy. The whole page needs to be redone but mainly you need to convince people that your offer is legit. |
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23rd Aug 2014, 03:10 PM
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I agree with the previous posts, especially when you try to tell me I will hate myself if I don't swallow your bait. The latest trend in squeeze pages is to pre-sell them with a splash page (no optin) and then lead the ones who proceed to a squeeze page with a video.
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