I need helpp with my first squeeze page

kridan · 24th Sep 2014, 11:41 AM

Hey warriors, i have just started up my FIRST squeeze page that is promoting a clickbank product.
As you guys might understand i'm a complete noob when it comes to this so i would love if anyone could help me and give some constructive advice on the content and layout of the site.

Raydal · 24th Sep 2014, 12:57 PM

Originally Posted by kridan

Hey warriors, i have just started up my FIRST squeeze page that is promoting a clickbank product.
As you guys might understand i'm a complete noob when it comes to this so i would love if anyone could help me and give some constructive advice on the content and layout of the site.

I nice start would be to give a link to the site so others could see it and
comment.

-Ray Edwards

AndyFrance · 24th Sep 2014, 01:17 PM

Originally Posted by Raydal

I nice start would be to give a link to the site so others could see it and
comment.

-Ray Edwards

Originally Posted by kridan

Hey warriors, i have just started up my FIRST squeeze page that is promoting a clickbank product.
As you guys might understand i'm a complete noob when it comes to this so i would love if anyone could help me and give some constructive advice on the content and layout of the site.

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kridan · 25th Sep 2014, 11:38 AM

Hehe.. oh im sorry, i was beeing forgetful, here's the link: How to reverse diabetes type 1 and type 2 TODAY!

And yes i know it's not nearly optimal, thats why i am asking you guys for help.

Jonathanrw · 25th Sep 2014, 02:23 PM

Nice product video. It is long with some typos but all in all it is still good. Your title is a bit long, is that your target keyword? My suggestion would be to go through the video and pull some of the content from there as well as the testimonials. I would definitely try to come up with some sort of logo or image of ghostbuster symbol over a syringe. The product owner emphasises on the no needles idea several times within the video. So, I would stick with text that focuses around the benefits of being diabetes free.

I hope this helps.

kridan · 25th Sep 2014, 02:51 PM

Originally Posted by Jonathanrw

Nice product video. It is long with some typos but all in all it is still good. Your title is a bit long, is that your target keyword? My suggestion would be to go through the video and pull some of the content from there as well as the testimonials. I would definitely try to come up with some sort of logo or image of ghostbuster symbol over a syringe. The product owner emphasises on the no needles idea several times within the video. So, I would stick with text that focuses around the benefits of being diabetes free.

I hope this helps.

Thank you for taking your time to help me out, yeah i kindof intented for that title to be my main keyphrase, but i could very well change it to something more "click friendly".

About adding content from the video, should i realy add more content to my site, i've heard that squeeze pages should be clean and have little text.

And my last question is, what do you think about the website layout, do you think it encourages people to click through to the affiliate link or could i make some changes to optimize it more?

Jonathanrw · 25th Sep 2014, 04:06 PM

On the content deal it generally depends on how you are going to drive traffic to your sales page. If your trying to rank in the search engines then you need content but if you are using paid marketing or email lists then you don't really need any content.

Jonathanrw · 25th Sep 2014, 04:12 PM

Originally Posted by kridan

And my last question is, what do you think about the website layout, do you think it encourages people to click through to the affiliate link or could i make some changes to optimize it more?

I think you need bigger buttons myself. Maybe red or green so they pop out to the user that it's a clickable option. Maybe turn the words "check it out" into a button and have it centered. I hope that helps. Let me know if you have any questions.

savidge4 · 25th Sep 2014, 04:36 PM

Went and did some quick basic research for you. you will want to target this 2x. once for diabetes 1 and again for diabetes 2. Diabetes 2 is a MUCH stronger term.

Your "Core" keyword term is Reverse Diabetes type 1 AND reverse Diabetes type 2. you are actually not helping yourself much by adding "How do you" or "how do I" - "how do I" by the way, would be a better match based on what someone would type into a search engine.

You are not giving us a reason to give you our e-mail address. you basically are not "squeezing"

loose the product links down the right side.

Loose the "Home Button"

flip your headlines - "Reverse diabetes type 1 and type 2" on the top, and "How do you reverse your diabetes type 1 or type 2" as the body header.

the button that says "Subscribe" should read more like "Get your 3 point report now"

"find out how now" what are you linking them to? a video. "Click here to watch an amazing video that will change your life"

IF this was my page. I would create a 2 page setup.

Page 1

Header: "Reverse diabetes type 1 and type 2"

left box: header: How to reverse your diabetes type 1 or type 2.
Are you or a loved one suffering from Type 1 or Type 2 Diabetes?
Imagine a life with:

NO MORE Needles
NO MORE Confusion
NO MORE Fear
NO MORE Embarrassment

Enter your email address to the right and we will instantly get you to our 3 point infographic that shares ( insert whatever it is )

Right Box is obviously the optin form. ask for FIRST name and EMAIL only

Page 2

Left Box: display the infographic on the 3 points
Right box. some text and the CTA button that gets them to the video.

Hope that Helps!

GregAU · 25th Sep 2014, 04:38 PM

Hi OP,

From looking at the page, I'm guessing (based on experience) it will convert at about 10%-15%.

Do you have stats on it? Have you started sending traffic?

So far, the only pages that convert at 45-60% for me have the following structure:

Headline packed with BENEFITS
Arrow pointing to email capture box
Button with action word.

For example, headline "Discover How Even Long Time Diabetes Sufferers Can Reverse Type 1 Diabetes Using Safe Natural Methods"

Then arrow pointing at the email capture box

The button saying "Instant Access Now" (not "subscribe").

The more graphics and content you have, the more distractions you have, and the less the conversions will be.

Hope this helps

charto911 · 25th Sep 2014, 04:40 PM

try unbounce.com for your first one. Trying to figure out the copywriting aspect will drive you nuts.

kridan · 25th Sep 2014, 04:49 PM

i added a button now, i'm thinking about adding a 4 reasons why section

kridan · 25th Sep 2014, 05:18 PM

Thank you guys so so much for taking all the time to helpme!
I have now made several changes to the site and i am convinced it will convert better now!

savidge4 · 25th Sep 2014, 07:54 PM

Kriden,

try this piece of code, it will completly remove all that crud on the top of your page as in the dark nav bar and above.

Code:

#masthead {
        display: none;
 }

Luke Dennison · 25th Sep 2014, 10:21 PM

In my opinion that is not a squeeze page.

dmarc · 27th Sep 2014, 10:18 PM

Seems pretty busy for a squeeze page.

Unless you're trying to rank on Google, I'd strip it down and simplify. With paid traffic, you really don't want anything distracting visitors from your prime objective... getting them to subscribe. Attention getting headline, value building sub-headline, call to action, opt-in form... all above the fold.

celente · 27th Sep 2014, 10:35 PM

Study your competitions. Find out how many subscvribers they are getting a day, and why they are using headlines, videos, copy and optins they way they do.

The secrets are not hiding, the secrets are in your competitors dealings and traffic already. Study the top 3% of businesses in your niche you will be surprised how they are doing things.

Looking at your squeeze page you have a lot to learn, its pretty dismal, but do not take that in a bad way, use it to get better. And find what is working or what headlines, and ideas, are getting people curious.

Leave that bug inside your propects head thinking "sheeesus,,, man! I cannot go without logging in and finding out more"

This is hard, but at the same time, its quite easy and most of the time the answers are staring you right in the face, and then that is easy to put into your HTML code.

Also use video too. This works in many niches, people with high converting sqeeze pages have like 2 minute videos sometimes, but its up to you and your testing. :-)

24th Sep 2014, 11:41 AM	#1
kridan Warrior Member Join Date: 2014 Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	I need helpp with my first squeeze page Share on: Hey warriors, i have just started up my FIRST squeeze page that is promoting a clickbank product. As you guys might understand i'm a complete noob when it comes to this so i would love if anyone could help me and give some constructive advice on the content and layout of the site.

25th Sep 2014, 11:38 AM	#4
kridan Warrior Member Join Date: 2014 Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: I need helpp with my first squeeze page Share on: Hehe.. oh im sorry, i was beeing forgetful, here's the link: How to reverse diabetes type 1 and type 2 TODAY! And yes i know it's not nearly optimal, thats why i am asking you guys for help.

25th Sep 2014, 02:23 PM	#5
Jonathanrw Warrior Member Join Date: 2014 Posts: 3 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: I need helpp with my first squeeze page Share on: Nice product video. It is long with some typos but all in all it is still good. Your title is a bit long, is that your target keyword? My suggestion would be to go through the video and pull some of the content from there as well as the testimonials. I would definitely try to come up with some sort of logo or image of ghostbuster symbol over a syringe. The product owner emphasises on the no needles idea several times within the video. So, I would stick with text that focuses around the benefits of being diabetes free. I hope this helps.

25th Sep 2014, 04:06 PM	#7
Jonathanrw Warrior Member Join Date: 2014 Posts: 3 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: I need helpp with my first squeeze page Share on: On the content deal it generally depends on how you are going to drive traffic to your sales page. If your trying to rank in the search engines then you need content but if you are using paid marketing or email lists then you don't really need any content.

25th Sep 2014, 04:36 PM	#9
savidge4 Midnight Oil Warrior Join Date: 2013 Location: Bridgeport, WV. Posts: 6,747 Thanks: 3,544 Thanked 6,538 Times in 3,469 Posts	Re: I need helpp with my first squeeze page Share on: Went and did some quick basic research for you. you will want to target this 2x. once for diabetes 1 and again for diabetes 2. Diabetes 2 is a MUCH stronger term. Your "Core" keyword term is Reverse Diabetes type 1 AND reverse Diabetes type 2. you are actually not helping yourself much by adding "How do you" or "how do I" - "how do I" by the way, would be a better match based on what someone would type into a search engine. You are not giving us a reason to give you our e-mail address. you basically are not "squeezing" loose the product links down the right side. Loose the "Home Button" flip your headlines - "Reverse diabetes type 1 and type 2" on the top, and "How do you reverse your diabetes type 1 or type 2" as the body header. the button that says "Subscribe" should read more like "Get your 3 point report now" "find out how now" what are you linking them to? a video. "Click here to watch an amazing video that will change your life" IF this was my page. I would create a 2 page setup. Page 1 Header: "Reverse diabetes type 1 and type 2" left box: header: How to reverse your diabetes type 1 or type 2. Are you or a loved one suffering from Type 1 or Type 2 Diabetes? Imagine a life with: NO MORE Needles NO MORE Confusion NO MORE Fear NO MORE Embarrassment Enter your email address to the right and we will instantly get you to our 3 point infographic that shares ( insert whatever it is ) Right Box is obviously the optin form. ask for FIRST name and EMAIL only Page 2 Left Box: display the infographic on the 3 points Right box. some text and the CTA button that gets them to the video. Hope that Helps!

25th Sep 2014, 04:38 PM	#10
GregAU Active Warrior War Room Member Join Date: 2013 Location: Sydney, Australia Posts: 32 Thanks: 69 Thanked 41 Times in 34 Posts	Re: I need helpp with my first squeeze page Share on: Hi OP, From looking at the page, I'm guessing (based on experience) it will convert at about 10%-15%. Do you have stats on it? Have you started sending traffic? So far, the only pages that convert at 45-60% for me have the following structure: Headline packed with BENEFITS Arrow pointing to email capture box Button with action word. For example, headline "Discover How Even Long Time Diabetes Sufferers Can Reverse Type 1 Diabetes Using Safe Natural Methods" Then arrow pointing at the email capture box The button saying "Instant Access Now" (not "subscribe"). The more graphics and content you have, the more distractions you have, and the less the conversions will be. Hope this helps
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charto911 Advanced Warrior War Room Member Join Date: 2009 Posts: 638 Thanks: 6 Thanked 42 Times in 34 Posts Blog Entries: 9	Re: I need helpp with my first squeeze page Share on: try unbounce.com for your first one. Trying to figure out the copywriting aspect will drive you nuts.
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25th Sep 2014, 04:49 PM	#12
kridan Warrior Member Join Date: 2014 Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: I need helpp with my first squeeze page Share on: i added a button now, i'm thinking about adding a 4 reasons why section

25th Sep 2014, 05:18 PM	#13
kridan Warrior Member Join Date: 2014 Posts: 5 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: I need helpp with my first squeeze page Share on: Thank you guys so so much for taking all the time to helpme! I have now made several changes to the site and i am convinced it will convert better now!

25th Sep 2014, 07:54 PM	#14
savidge4 Midnight Oil Warrior Join Date: 2013 Location: Bridgeport, WV. Posts: 6,747 Thanks: 3,544 Thanked 6,538 Times in 3,469 Posts	Re: I need helpp with my first squeeze page Share on: Kriden, try this piece of code, it will completly remove all that crud on the top of your page as in the dark nav bar and above. Code: #masthead { display: none; }

25th Sep 2014, 10:21 PM	#15
Luke Dennison VIP User Join Date: 2013 Location: Leeds, UK Posts: 1,500 Thanks: 220 Thanked 575 Times in 349 Posts	Re: I need helpp with my first squeeze page Share on: In my opinion that is not a squeeze page.
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27th Sep 2014, 10:18 PM	#16
dmarc HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: 2013 Location: USA Posts: 238 Thanks: 18 Thanked 57 Times in 48 Posts	Re: I need helpp with my first squeeze page Share on: Seems pretty busy for a squeeze page. Unless you're trying to rank on Google, I'd strip it down and simplify. With paid traffic, you really don't want anything distracting visitors from your prime objective... getting them to subscribe. Attention getting headline, value building sub-headline, call to action, opt-in form... all above the fold.
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celente VIP Warrior War Room Member Join Date: 2008 Location: , , . Posts: 7,090 Thanks: 1,774 Thanked 2,722 Times in 1,341 Posts	Re: I need helpp with my first squeeze page Share on: Study your competitions. Find out how many subscvribers they are getting a day, and why they are using headlines, videos, copy and optins they way they do. The secrets are not hiding, the secrets are in your competitors dealings and traffic already. Study the top 3% of businesses in your niche you will be surprised how they are doing things. Looking at your squeeze page you have a lot to learn, its pretty dismal, but do not take that in a bad way, use it to get better. And find what is working or what headlines, and ideas, are getting people curious. Leave that bug inside your propects head thinking "sheeesus,,, man! I cannot go without logging in and finding out more" This is hard, but at the same time, its quite easy and most of the time the answers are staring you right in the face, and then that is easy to put into your HTML code. Also use video too. This works in many niches, people with high converting sqeeze pages have like 2 minute videos sometimes, but its up to you and your testing. :-)
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