Help Increasing My Visitor Value

JamesPenn · 07-14-2009, 12:56 PM

Hi Warriors

I really want to start rolling out some massive paid advertising campaigns in the next few weeks and months - but first I need to increase my visitor value so I can pay more for traffic.

At the moment it's pretty poor.

Here's the process at the moment:

1. Visitor arrives at Age Defying Nutrition: Eat Your Way To A More Youthful You

2. They opt-in and are redirected to Rejuvenate: Turn Back The Clock

3. They then confirm their email address and are taken to a page where they download what they subscribed for and suggests that they should take a look at Transform Yourself Through Natural Beauty | Natural Beauty Regimen

I'm not too worried about the squeeze page as I can keep split-testing until I get a number I'm happy with - but I do need help getting the two reports to convert.

Both:

A) Rejuvenate: Turn Back The Clock

and

B) Transform Yourself Through Natural Beauty | Natural Beauty Regimen

So, if you can offer any advice and suggestions to increase the conversions on both of those reports, then please post below.

Also, if you'd like to offer your services to re-write either or both pages, then please PM me.

So, Warriors, what changes do you suggest I make?

Thanks,
James

Raydal · 07-14-2009, 01:54 PM

Quote:

"The Tiny Sum Of $14.95"

Tiny sum is an oxymoron. That's just a tiny suggestions.

-Ray Edwards

Kyle Tully · 07-14-2009, 05:17 PM

#1 Proof.

You can yap all day and use all the copywriting tricks in the book, but without real proof you'll only get a fraction of the possible results.

John Willer · 07-14-2009, 06:43 PM

This isn't what you're looking for but... sell something higher priced.

RentItNow · 07-14-2009, 07:49 PM

Maybe a video with Dr Oz saying what some of these things can do for you. Also, a one year guarantee can put people's minds more at ease. And push the guarantee in the headline or sub and first paragraph or all three. You have no sort of before/after pics or anything that grabs scanner's eyes.

Good job tho.

07-14-2009, 12:56 PM	#1
JamesPenn Senior Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: Exeter, United Kingdom. Posts: 1,356 Thanks: 174 Thanked 505 Times in 100 Posts Social Networking	Help Increasing My Visitor Value Hi Warriors I really want to start rolling out some massive paid advertising campaigns in the next few weeks and months - but first I need to increase my visitor value so I can pay more for traffic. At the moment it's pretty poor. Here's the process at the moment: 1. Visitor arrives at Age Defying Nutrition: Eat Your Way To A More Youthful You 2. They opt-in and are redirected to Rejuvenate: Turn Back The Clock 3. They then confirm their email address and are taken to a page where they download what they subscribed for and suggests that they should take a look at Transform Yourself Through Natural Beauty \| Natural Beauty Regimen I'm not too worried about the squeeze page as I can keep split-testing until I get a number I'm happy with - but I do need help getting the two reports to convert. Both: A) Rejuvenate: Turn Back The Clock and B) Transform Yourself Through Natural Beauty \| Natural Beauty Regimen So, if you can offer any advice and suggestions to increase the conversions on both of those reports, then please post below. Also, if you'd like to offer your services to re-write either or both pages, then please PM me. So, Warriors, what changes do you suggest I make? Thanks, James
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07-14-2009, 05:17 PM	#3
Kyle Tully ConsultingTycoon.com War Room Member Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: Vaucluse, Australia. Posts: 2,343 Thanks: 98 Thanked 268 Times in 128 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Re: Help Increasing My Visitor Value #1 Proof. You can yap all day and use all the copywriting tricks in the book, but without real proof you'll only get a fraction of the possible results.
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07-14-2009, 06:43 PM	#4
John Willer Active Warrior Join Date: Dec 2008 Posts: 65 Thanks: 1 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	Re: Help Increasing My Visitor Value This isn't what you're looking for but... sell something higher priced.
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07-14-2009, 07:49 PM	#5
RentItNow Aka: John J. Adams War Room Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Windsor, ON Posts: 917 Thanks: 171 Thanked 184 Times in 158 Posts Social Networking	Re: Help Increasing My Visitor Value Maybe a video with Dr Oz saying what some of these things can do for you. Also, a one year guarantee can put people's minds more at ease. And push the guarantee in the headline or sub and first paragraph or all three. You have no sort of before/after pics or anything that grabs scanner's eyes. Good job tho.
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