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Old 08-14-2009, 05:30 AM   #1
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Default Critique the sales letter that you'll want to copy!

Morning Warriors,

I revised my sales copy as you all suggested, I have 5 different versions rotating within my script and will keep the one with the highest conversions...I still need to perhaps make the P.S's a bit stronger..Let me know what ya think and what version you got to see! You may have to clear cookies in order to see newer copies..Thanks!

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