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Old 08-29-2009, 10:35 AM   #1
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I was actually asked this:

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time is not really the question at hand here. it really depends on what i have to work with and what the market is, because that determines how hungry the market is for the product. With that i sell the sizzle for them to bite on to.
Of course there's more to it (like traffic source and what the product is actually selling), but I was wondering what your take is on this. How would you answer that question and what do you think it takes to have a 2-6% conversion?
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Old 08-29-2009, 11:05 AM   #2
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The whole 2-6% part is what puts the wrench in the works.

I can easily say how long it takes for me to write copy.

It's pretty well known in the industry that I put the same extreme effort into each and every project I get. So copy that converts at 2-6% is no faster or slower to write than copy that converts at a much higher (or lower) rate.

The premise that the more a copywriter works on the copy, the more it converts is a flawed premise.

Usually when this question is asked, you know you're dealing with a dilettante... an amateur who has learned a couple key marketing phrases and is trying to ride them to a successful campaign.

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Old 08-29-2009, 11:12 AM   #3
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EXACTLY! You're right on the money, Vin. As usual. It's like thinking if I put in 3 weeks to get a 2% conversion, I can put in another 6 months, to get a 30% conversion. As if.

Of course, I was just curious to know how others would answer that. So thanks for the feedback. And hey, now I've got a good idea of what niche to go after next. It's not like I was being hired as the copywriter. If so, I probably wouldn't have, lol.
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Old 08-29-2009, 11:16 AM   #4
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Yeah, weird question. Vin's assessment is dead on. My other thought is maybe the asker is a prospect trying to find a way to negotiate a smaller fee.

Wouldn't it be nice though if you could just say, "Ok, if I spend this many hours it'll convert at x%, and this many hours, it will convert at y%. Which do you want?"!

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Old 08-29-2009, 11:17 AM   #5
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Hahahaha, that would be great.
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Old 08-29-2009, 07:03 PM   #6
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Hi, nice comments all. For me, I spend far more time researching and thinking than in writing. Converting features to benefits, identifying the ideal customer, contemplating the offer, figuring the back end, keyword search, figuring the "WIIFM" (What's in it for me) from the customer's perspective, etc.

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Hi, nice comments all. For me, I spend far more time researching and thinking than in writing. Converting features to benefits, identifying the ideal customer, contemplating the offer, figuring the back end, keyword search, figuring the "WIIFM" (What's in it for me) from the customer's perspective, etc.
What carlton calls "percolating." I do that for a bunch of my time.

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Swiping Vin's answer in case I ever get asked that question
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Old 08-30-2009, 12:40 PM   #9
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I know a preacher who was once asked to preach as a
guest speaker at another church. In answer to the
question how much money he was expecting, he replied

"It depends on if you want a $100 sermon or a $500
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I wish it were the same for copywriters.

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Old 08-30-2009, 01:33 PM   #10
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It's like thinking if I put in 3 weeks to get a 2% conversion, I can put in another 6 months, to get a 30% conversion.
And guess what?

At the end of those 6 months, you might actually find that
your conversion rate is much, MUCH lower than 2%.

I don't know about you guys, but for me there's a time
beyond which I wouldn't want to continue working on
any letter.

Why?

Because when we concentrate on the same letter for so long,
we ourselves will get bored of it and unnecessarily start
removing and editing the good parts of the letter also.


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Old 08-30-2009, 03:17 PM   #11
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EXACTLY! You're right on the money, Vin. As usual. It's like thinking if I put in 3 weeks to get a 2% conversion, I can put in another 6 months, to get a 30% conversion. As if.
The same kind of math applies to: a woman can bear a child in 9 months, so 9 women can bear a child in 1 month...

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Old 08-30-2009, 06:41 PM   #12
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The same kind of math applies to: a woman can bear a child in 9 months, so 9 women can bear a child in 1 month...
What? You say that as if it's not possible... get out of town! LOL.
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Dean, I couldn't have agreed more. I can't imagine myself working on a sales letter for 6 months, let alone 6 weeks. Maybe 6 months LATER I look at it - that's fine with me.

Ray, I wish that was the case here as well.
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I would say - How long is a piece of string.

You could spend months tweaking in order to get 2-6% conversion or it could convert like that straight out of the door.

I want a good keyword researcher, not for min sites but for tech articles. Hit me up if you've got those skillz!
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"so 9 women can bear a child in 1 month..."

Funny you should say that! I've had nine women tell me, "Oh, you're such a child, I cannot bear you for even one more month!"
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Funny you should say that! I've had nine women tell me, "Oh, you're such a child, I cannot bear you for even one more month!"
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I know a preacher who was once asked to preach as a guest speaker at another church. In answer to the question how much money he was expecting, he replied "It depends on if you want a $100 sermon or a $500 sermon."
Last Sunday morning the Pastor announced to his congregation: "My good people, I have here in my hands, three sermons...a $500 sermon that lasts five minutes, a $100 sermon that lasts fifteen minutes, and a $5 sermon that lasts two and a half hours. Now, we'll take the collection and then we'll know which one I get to deliver."

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Alexa, you gotta be kidding me. That's funny... but crazy... but very funny, lol.
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