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09-25-2009, 08:48 AM
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|  Amazingly talented copywriting geniuses Hi Everyone, I am working on a sales brochure for a client who is a hypnotist that does stop smoking and goal achievement training. We are looking for a new name for his center. Here are some possible ideas that still needs work. His target is people aged 35-55, with some college education. Their greatest desire is to get rid of the nagging thoughts about and habit regarding tobacco use in any form (smoking, snuff, chew, drinking). However, he also teaches people how to relax and achieve goals. He wants to do less stop smoking and more goal achievement training. Looking for something prospects will associate the desired end result with and a catchy phrase for his center in the Chicago area. He is already fairly well known having been there for years and has successfully worked with thousands of people helping them stop smoking in one visit using something called a cool laser and hypnosis. Your input or added names would be great! Thanks for your ideas. Here is where we currently are. Please tell me how you might react seeing any title or suggest one that engages your mind to find out more about his offer. Remember, it will be in a tri-fold brochure with more information. Thanks. Susan Successfully You Successfully Yours The Solution Center The Success Center Simple Success Center The Success Place The Place for Success The Place I Succeed The Place To Succeed The Simple Solutions Center The Easy Solutions Center Time to Succeed Center The Place I Become A Genius Genius Training Center |
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09-25-2009, 08:58 AM
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Your New Life Style Life Style Freedom Life Style Goals Life Style Success anything to do with life style |
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09-25-2009, 09:05 AM
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I want a good keyword researcher, not for min sites but for tech articles. Hit me up if you've got those skillz!
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09-25-2009, 10:32 AM
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Your New Life. Then receptionist can greet people with "Welcome to your new life..."
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09-25-2009, 10:35 AM
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09-25-2009, 11:45 AM
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Third this. Vin kicks azz again.  |
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09-25-2009, 11:50 AM
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LOL Perfect example of what we were talkin' about the other day, bro. Beeyooteeful. | |
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09-25-2009, 12:40 PM
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This probably was a slogan for some charity organization, but I find it appropriate for this center. "Help Us, Help You" Edmund |
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09-25-2009, 01:25 PM
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Thank you everyone for your ideas. I appreciate the time you've taken to help my client. Susan |
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09-25-2009, 01:44 PM
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Hi Susan, Of the list you gave I like "The Success Center" the best. Vin Montello's "Your New Life" is excellent and the idea regarding the receptionist is just brilliant. A few more ideas that come to mind: - Chicago's Achievement Center - Your Success Center - Where Dreams Become Reality - Unleash Your Potential! - Your Partner In Success - Chicago's Success Institute - Helping Chicago's Most Successful People Since 1999 - When Excuses Stop Being Fun - The Place Where Extraordinary Happens - Your Life Transformation Success Center - Achieve Your Goals Faster. - Your Goals... Delivered! Cheers  David |
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09-25-2009, 05:34 PM
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