Please Look Over My Landing Page

Sour · 09-30-2009, 06:23 PM

I'm still new at this, so I suspect numerous things will be wrong, but please let me know what I can do to improve it. I haven't started promoting the site yet because I wanted to get all of the basic errors fixed before I put everything in my own hands and split test everything to death.

BTW, I know the links don't work. I just didn't want my CB analytics to be affected.

Thank you, guys!

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jukeboxhero · 09-30-2009, 09:06 PM

Uh wheres the opt in box? For starters?

Sour · 09-30-2009, 10:34 PM

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Originally Posted by jukeboxhero

Uh wheres the opt in box? For starters?

Is every landing page supposed to have an opt-in box or something? I was kind of just focusing on making sales right now, since I'm new to all of this.

Collette · 10-01-2009, 01:18 PM

Answer this question:

"Why do ordinary people take singing lessons?"

Hint: It's NOT because they're afraid that they're damaging their voice by using the wrong singing techniques.

Make a list of the answers.

If you need help with the answers, go to your local karoke (sp?) bar and ask a few folks why they come there to sing.

Let me assure you, you will not hear one single one of them say anything about damaging their voice.

Take the answers and have another go at this letter.

Takeaway lesson: Know your prospect. Learn their desires. Learn their fears. Understand their motivations. THEN write your letter.

Ross Dalangin · 10-01-2009, 01:31 PM

1. Add a voice ads on your page similar to my reviewsscript.com which is created by a fellow warrior Ginny Culp or any sample of background music while your visitors are reading your sales copy.

2. You should display your name and why they will trust you. Are you a singer or music arranger?

3. Provide a sample.

Ross

Joshua.E1 · 10-01-2009, 10:27 PM

There are 10 secrets to a landing page, if you are able to know them, you will be able to do very well with your landing page.

09-30-2009, 06:23 PM	#1
Sour Jordan Robert War Room Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 210 Thanks: 12 Thanked 20 Times in 14 Posts	Please Look Over My Landing Page I'm still new at this, so I suspect numerous things will be wrong, but please let me know what I can do to improve it. I haven't started promoting the site yet because I wanted to get all of the basic errors fixed before I put everything in my own hands and split test everything to death. BTW, I know the links don't work. I just didn't want my CB analytics to be affected. Thank you, guys! learnhowtosing.net

09-30-2009, 09:06 PM	#2
jukeboxhero HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Location: Michigan Posts: 162 Thanks: 8 Thanked 95 Times in 28 Posts	Re: Please Look Over My Landing Page Uh wheres the opt in box? For starters?

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Collette Advanced Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: alicubi super pluvia Posts: 780 Thanks: 236 Thanked 511 Times in 259 Posts	Re: Please Look Over My Landing Page Answer this question: "Why do ordinary people take singing lessons?" Hint: It's NOT because they're afraid that they're damaging their voice by using the wrong singing techniques. Make a list of the answers. If you need help with the answers, go to your local karoke (sp?) bar and ask a few folks why they come there to sing. Let me assure you, you will not hear one single one of them say anything about damaging their voice. Take the answers and have another go at this letter. Takeaway lesson: Know your prospect. Learn their desires. Learn their fears. Understand their motivations. THEN write your letter.

10-01-2009, 01:31 PM	#5
Ross Dalangin Senior Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: http://QuickMinisiteBuilder.com Posts: 2,944 Blog Entries: 26 Thanks: 265 Thanked 168 Times in 119 Posts Social Networking	Re: Please Look Over My Landing Page 1. Add a voice ads on your page similar to my reviewsscript.com which is created by a fellow warrior Ginny Culp or any sample of background music while your visitors are reading your sales copy. 2. You should display your name and why they will trust you. Are you a singer or music arranger? 3. Provide a sample. Ross
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