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10-04-2009, 02:02 PM
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| Senior Warrior Member War Room Member  Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: , , USA.
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|  Could You Please Help Me Give My Title A Magical Make-Over?
Good afternoon fellow Warriors and wizards of words  I have a title, while decent, just isn't pulling the eyeballs that I hoped it would! I previously posted in here for some general tips before I posted the copy and to quote Bill and/or Ted I got some "most excellent" help. Special shout out and thanks to Metronicity who went above and beyond helping me with elements of my copy after it was written! I'm hoping some of you will be kind enough to wave your "word wands" over my title to help give it a little zing. Some punching power that would make Mike Tyson in his prime envious. Please PM me for the title, as I don't want to violate the rules of the forum and get banned. Anyone who helps me will have a virtual ice cream waiting! Thanks in advance. |
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10-04-2009, 03:20 PM
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| Selling with Stories War Room Member  Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Southern Maryland
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| Re: Could You Please Help Me Give My Title A Magical Make-Over?
Check your inbox - I'll be happy to take a crack at it! Dot |
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