Subtitle Needed

cima · 10-25-2009, 10:43 AM

Hi There,

In few days, I'm going to launch my new product which will be named the UltimateForexTradingMethod. Even, if I've already found the title of the product (lucky me) which remains very simple :
"Samuel Cimamonti's Ultimate Forex Trading Method", I'm still looking for a subtitle (or catchy phrase, actually I don't know how this is called !

)

For example, on this website : Dean Saunders's 10 Minute Forex Wealth Builder, the title is "Dean Saunders' 10 Minute Forex Wealth Builder" and what I call the catchy phrase is "Building wealth in forex with only 10 minutes a day".

I'm completely new at copywriting so I was wondering If you would be kind enough to give some ideas concerning my "catchy phrase", knowing that my product is a forex method (a good one I hope

)

Thanks again !

Samuel.

TimCastleman · 10-25-2009, 11:39 AM

Why not 8 minute wealth? Same idea, same concept, just 2 minutes quicker?

Tim

EaglePiServ · 10-25-2009, 12:46 PM

What your asking for is a USP - A Unique Selling Proposition. What is so different/better/quicker about your product over one of the other thousand or so forex methods/robots out there?

travlinguy · 10-25-2009, 01:05 PM

The subtitle is often a showcase for the main benefit in the program, something that sets you apart from all the other Forex programs. Since we don't know what that is, why not post a set or two of your juciest bullet points. Then we might have something to work with. Good luck.

Smyle · 10-25-2009, 01:39 PM

Another thing to focus on are what people don't like so look for bad reviews of some of the competition. If there are any downsides, play on that as a strength of yours. (If it's true of course)..

Case in point, I never looked into Forex trading becuase it seemed complicated. Even some of the established systems seemed complicated to me.. So a tagline I would be looking for would be "Forex Trading Made Simple" Just my thought.

Steve Thompson · 10-25-2009, 02:31 PM

Hi Samuel

Just a couple of thoughts - the first on your title. Are you well known in the Forex arena? If not, then I suggest that your name in the title is maybe misplaced and wastes valuable real estate in the most crucial part of your "pitch". The title should ideally include the principal benefit. For example "How To Create Massive Wealth in Forex Without Risking Your Shirt".

Then you could have a sub head something like "22 Secret Guerrilla Tactics For Beating The Market - Even In Bad Times!".

Hope it helps.

Regards

Steve

Sweet_pea03 · 10-25-2009, 03:08 PM

" 10 minutes for a HIGH forex"

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Try to be on the subject. You know better your product , so just express your feelings

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Best of luck I wish. Please announce us when you release it.

cima · 10-25-2009, 03:20 PM

Thank you very much everybody ! That's very kind !
I really love the "How To Create Massive Wealth in Forex Without Risking Your Shirt", that's why I think I'm going to take that one.

I will let you know when the product will be launched.

Thanks again !

Samuel.

cima · 10-25-2009, 03:45 PM

In the end, do you think "Finally Create Massive Wealth in Forex Without Risking Your Shirt" could be good ?

Thanks again.

dorothydot · 10-25-2009, 04:57 PM

Dear Samuel,

One thing I dearly love to include is a quotation. No, not a testimonial - a quote.

Like, "Cause and effect are two sides of one fact." - R. W. Emerson

Or, "Don't compromise yourself. You are all you've got." - J. Joplin

That sort of thing, used sparingly, can really command attention and interest. Use a google search on "Money Quotes" or something of that ilk. I'm sure you can find a lot of great ones.

Hope this helps,
Dot

PS - "Don't take life too seriously. You'll never get out alive." - Bugs Bunny. LOL!

rconejr · 10-26-2009, 03:39 AM

Not liking the "finally" in there, it seems like it can be a little awkward if you read it with the wrong emphasis. Maybe just me. But I like the rest of it.

10-25-2009, 10:43 AM	#1
cima French Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Marseille, France Posts: 101 Thanks: 4 Thanked 4 Times in 3 Posts Social Networking	Subtitle Needed Hi There, In few days, I'm going to launch my new product which will be named the UltimateForexTradingMethod. Even, if I've already found the title of the product (lucky me) which remains very simple : "Samuel Cimamonti's Ultimate Forex Trading Method", I'm still looking for a subtitle (or catchy phrase, actually I don't know how this is called ! ) For example, on this website : Dean Saunders's 10 Minute Forex Wealth Builder, the title is "Dean Saunders' 10 Minute Forex Wealth Builder" and what I call the catchy phrase is "Building wealth in forex with only 10 minutes a day". I'm completely new at copywriting so I was wondering If you would be kind enough to give some ideas concerning my "catchy phrase", knowing that my product is a forex method (a good one I hope ) Thanks again ! Samuel.
	My Forex Review Blog : www.UltimateForexReview.com

10-25-2009, 11:39 AM	#2
TimCastleman Banned War Room Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Posts: 803 Blog Entries: 34 Thanks: 13 Thanked 162 Times in 95 Posts	Re: Subtitle Needed Why not 8 minute wealth? Same idea, same concept, just 2 minutes quicker? Tim

10-25-2009, 12:46 PM	#3
EaglePiServ Gobsh1te War Room Member Join Date: May 2009 Posts: 51 Thanks: 9 Thanked 9 Times in 9 Posts	Re: Subtitle Needed What your asking for is a USP - A Unique Selling Proposition. What is so different/better/quicker about your product over one of the other thousand or so forex methods/robots out there?

10-25-2009, 01:05 PM	#4
travlinguy HyperActive Warrior Join Date: Jun 2008 Location: , , USA. Posts: 441 Thanks: 34 Thanked 91 Times in 80 Posts	Re: Subtitle Needed The subtitle is often a showcase for the main benefit in the program, something that sets you apart from all the other Forex programs. Since we don't know what that is, why not post a set or two of your juciest bullet points. Then we might have something to work with. Good luck.
	"The pen is mightier than the sword. But that's only because it's easier to thrust into someone's ear at close range." http://www.prosewiz.com

10-25-2009, 01:39 PM	#5
Smyle Warrior Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 3 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: Subtitle Needed Another thing to focus on are what people don't like so look for bad reviews of some of the competition. If there are any downsides, play on that as a strength of yours. (If it's true of course).. Case in point, I never looked into Forex trading becuase it seemed complicated. Even some of the established systems seemed complicated to me.. So a tagline I would be looking for would be "Forex Trading Made Simple" Just my thought.

10-25-2009, 02:31 PM	#6
Steve Thompson Warrior Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Huddersfield, England Posts: 3 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Social Networking	Re: Subtitle Needed Hi Samuel Just a couple of thoughts - the first on your title. Are you well known in the Forex arena? If not, then I suggest that your name in the title is maybe misplaced and wastes valuable real estate in the most crucial part of your "pitch". The title should ideally include the principal benefit. For example "How To Create Massive Wealth in Forex Without Risking Your Shirt". Then you could have a sub head something like "22 Secret Guerrilla Tactics For Beating The Market - Even In Bad Times!". Hope it helps. Regards Steve

10-25-2009, 03:08 PM	#7
Sweet_pea03 Active Warrior Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 36 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	Re: Subtitle Needed " 10 minutes for a HIGH forex" > Try to be on the subject. You know better your product , so just express your feelings . Best of luck I wish. Please announce us when you release it.

10-25-2009, 03:20 PM	#8
cima French Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Marseille, France Posts: 101 Thanks: 4 Thanked 4 Times in 3 Posts Social Networking	Re: Subtitle Needed Thank you very much everybody ! That's very kind ! I really love the "How To Create Massive Wealth in Forex Without Risking Your Shirt", that's why I think I'm going to take that one. I will let you know when the product will be launched. Thanks again ! Samuel.
	My Forex Review Blog : www.UltimateForexReview.com

10-25-2009, 03:45 PM	#9
cima French Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Marseille, France Posts: 101 Thanks: 4 Thanked 4 Times in 3 Posts Social Networking	Re: Subtitle Needed In the end, do you think "Finally Create Massive Wealth in Forex Without Risking Your Shirt" could be good ? Thanks again.
	My Forex Review Blog : www.UltimateForexReview.com

10-25-2009, 04:57 PM	#10
dorothydot HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Aug 2008 Location: Southern Maryland Posts: 309 Thanks: 157 Thanked 39 Times in 37 Posts	Re: Subtitle Needed Dear Samuel, One thing I dearly love to include is a quotation. No, not a testimonial - a quote. Like, "Cause and effect are two sides of one fact." - R. W. Emerson Or, "Don't compromise yourself. You are all you've got." - J. Joplin That sort of thing, used sparingly, can really command attention and interest. Use a google search on "Money Quotes" or something of that ilk. I'm sure you can find a lot of great ones. Hope this helps, Dot PS - "Don't take life too seriously. You'll never get out alive." - Bugs Bunny. LOL!
	"Sell the Magic of Your Dream" www.DP-Copywriting-Service.com

10-26-2009, 03:39 AM	#11
rconejr Warrior Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 19 Thanks: 5 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	Re: Subtitle Needed Not liking the "finally" in there, it seems like it can be a little awkward if you read it with the wrong emphasis. Maybe just me. But I like the rest of it.