My First Sales Page, Comments Please???

tantrabliss2 · 09-20-2008, 04:27 PM

Hi Guys,

This is my first attempt of a sales page.
I tried to tell a compelling story based on my own life.
It is making some sales but the conversion rate is low.
I know the domain name is spelled incorrectly.
Any tips or comments to help increase conversions would be really helpful?

Do you think having my address at the bottom in Australia would hurt sales?

A Breakthrough in Intense Pleasure and Connection

09-20-2008, 04:27 PM	#1
tantrabliss2 Warrior Member Join Date: May 2008 Location: Australia Posts: 17 Thanks: 1 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	My First Sales Page, Comments Please??? Hi Guys, This is my first attempt of a sales page. I tried to tell a compelling story based on my own life. It is making some sales but the conversion rate is low. I know the domain name is spelled incorrectly. Any tips or comments to help increase conversions would be really helpful? Do you think having my address at the bottom in Australia would hurt sales? A Breakthrough in Intense Pleasure and Connection