Need your honest feedback on my sites headline

searchnology · 11-02-2009, 05:36 PM

My site is due to launch in a couple months...the URL is SignaStock [dot]com

The Headline: Bear Market...Bull Market..You can Profit either way (seems like it needs a little help to be more engaging)

I don't have thin skin so any help is apppreciated.

Thanks

Mtkent · 11-02-2009, 05:59 PM

Usually you would use what the outcome of your program will/could be. I know it's old school but I still use the old Who else wants to know...? in mine and then tell them what it did for you. I think your Headline would be a good follow up headline right after something like I described.

edmltw · 11-02-2009, 06:54 PM

I was doing the stock niche for a client of mine recently, here is a headline I like, but I did not use it and saved it within my "folder"

Now You Can Invest Smartly, Whether Rain or Shine... Make Higher Returns With Lower Risks

Take it, its yours

lenlatimer · 11-02-2009, 07:58 PM

Hi,
Here are a couple ideas.

Discover The Amazing Winning Secrets To Trading Profits In Bear and Bull Markets!

How To Turn Your Trading Into A Well-Oiled Money Making Machine in Both Bear and Bull Markets!!!

Good luck

SamKane · 11-02-2009, 10:25 PM

Nice website. I'm using a similar "hook" on a friends trading website.
People know that what they are being sold by the media (buy and hold) is
no longer working. You should capitalize on that.
Maybe something like:

"The Death of Buy and Hold Investing"

How To Make Money In Any Market (Even This One)
By Taking Advantage of The Herd of Value Investors

While The Herd Was Losing Their Life Savings... Our Inside Stock Picks Were Averaging 110% Annual Returns!

I think you should also place the "As Seen On..." graphic above the headline area.

Sam Kane

mavensophie · 11-03-2009, 06:03 AM

I just put up a free report on an interesting way to create headlines: it would be perfect for you site. I haven't finished my own sales letter, but I have a segment of a webinar where I teach this and it is miraculously new and fresh. url is in my sig... I think. :-)

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Mtkent Warrior Member Join Date: Oct 2009 Posts: 24 Thanks: 0 Thanked 4 Times in 4 Posts	Re: Need your honest feedback on my sites headline Usually you would use what the outcome of your program will/could be. I know it's old school but I still use the old Who else wants to know...? in mine and then tell them what it did for you. I think your Headline would be a good follow up headline right after something like I described.

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SamKane Active Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Jun 2009 Posts: 54 Thanks: 25 Thanked 22 Times in 15 Posts	Re: Need your honest feedback on my sites headline Nice website. I'm using a similar "hook" on a friends trading website. People know that what they are being sold by the media (buy and hold) is no longer working. You should capitalize on that. Maybe something like: "The Death of Buy and Hold Investing" How To Make Money In Any Market (Even This One) By Taking Advantage of The Herd of Value Investors While The Herd Was Losing Their Life Savings... Our Inside Stock Picks Were Averaging 110% Annual Returns! I think you should also place the "As Seen On..." graphic above the headline area. Sam Kane

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