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11-12-2009, 02:36 PM
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LET 'ER RIP! NEED YOUR CRITIQUE FOR IM SALES COPY PLEASE!
Hey there all you sales copy Guru's. I'd like to hear from you about my re-written sales copy. The site is www.thesecretinterview.com. All your reviews/critiques are more than welcome. Just let 'er rip and let me know what you think. Thanks, ,Mark.
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11-12-2009, 03:31 PM
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Re: LET 'ER RIP! NEED YOUR CRITIQUE FOR IM SALES COPY PLEASE!
Hi, the site appears parked at the moment.
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11-12-2009, 03:59 PM
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Re: LET 'ER RIP! NEED YOUR CRITIQUE FOR IM SALES COPY PLEASE!
Yeah, there's a picture of a guy picking up horse poop.... or something.
So... if you're selling poop-scooping this might be a start. 
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11-13-2009, 09:29 AM
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Re: LET 'ER RIP! NEED YOUR CRITIQUE FOR IM SALES COPY PLEASE!
I couldn't see it either.
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11-13-2009, 11:44 AM
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Re: LET 'ER RIP! NEED YOUR CRITIQUE FOR IM SALES COPY PLEASE!
Well the domain is the secret interview. He's sold me on it being secret. Instant credibility
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