Review please...

[Ludovic]

Hi, I recently launched my membership site with a brand new sales process. I would like to hear some critques/opinons for optimization purposes.

Private Label Rights


Thank you
-Ludovc

[josspam]

It looks great!!!

But you have this code at the bottom of the page

<!-- Google Code for Squeeze Page ---> Lead Conversion Page -->

Check it out

[travlinguy]

I checked your offer and actully opted in to see what you were offering. I found three 'One Time Offers' WAY too agressive. And if that wasn't enough, the same series of OTOs shows up after confirming the email addy. If it's your intention to piss people off before they've even gotten to know what you're all about, you've nailed it.

[Ken_Caudill]

Five figure monthly income?

Good-looking page.

[Ludovic]

Thanks for the great comments. josspam, I don't see the code at the bottom of the page, it must be my browser. What browser did you view that code with? Travling, does the redirection of the same sales process ignore you, or do the actual offers do. Also, I never claimed it to be a one time offer, just a limited and an exclusive offer that will end soon. But thanks for that comment. I can reconsider a change in my sales process after a few testing. I'm very open-minded. However, I'm glad I got a chance to view the mood of one of my subscribers.

Any comments or suggestions are appreciated...

All the best,
Ludovic L.

[travlinguy]

If you mean does the repeat of the same three OTOs twice annoy me, yes. Maybe I didn't make my comment clear. I sign up for your report or whatever. I get hit with not one, but three 'in yer face' OTOs. And there's no way to make it stop unless I just want to forget your report and membership and click away, so I hang in there.

Then I finally get the report you're offering and it's got a membership card and nothing more than a commercial. And when I click the link in the report, I'm directed back to the chain of three OTOs. If you think people are going to be cool with that, good luck.

If you want the right to offer stuff to people that sign up for a report, you're going to have to put some value in there. I don't mind seeing offers if there's something useful as well. But the whole process was just an exercise in aggrivation.

The first thing I'm going to do when I get an email from you is opt out because I have better things to do. And I'll guess a lot of others will do the same.

Oh, I do think your Web design is excellent, but that's not quite enough. Good luck.