Peugot Make A New Interactive Advertisement.

Intrepreneur · 12-09-2009, 06:39 AM

Thought you'd all like to see Peugot's new ad. It's a multi taskers test where you get a call to your house etc. (I'm dying to test drive the 3008

).

Anyways here you go.

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Intrepreneur · 12-10-2009, 10:35 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MarkAndrews IMCopywriting

It's Peugeot not Peugot.

Is that it?

No comment on the ad?

Scott Murdaugh · 12-10-2009, 11:24 AM

I think it sucks.

They give no reason why I should give them my number, except that it'll "only be used for the test"...

How do I know that part of the test isn't a hard sales pitch from some telemarketer? Also, I stared at the page for a good 30 seconds before anything happened... If I wasn't trying to figure the ad out I'd have bounced long before they even pitched me.

And I have no idea what it is except "multi-tasking training". Who's it for? How do I know if it can help me?

I think the ad is bad on about every level.

-Scott

RickDuris · 12-10-2009, 11:43 AM

Thanks. Definitely creative. Don't quite get the benefit of taking the test. Nor do I understand the process. - Rick Duris

PS: I think the compelling call to action is an attractive English babe asking me to "Show me what you've got."

Now that's irresistible.

theultimate1 · 12-11-2009, 11:48 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MarkAndrews IMCopywriting

What more can be said?

You could probably comment on how it could be improved.

Why don't I do it myself? I'm not that smart a person yet. So, I'll just learn for now, and make an attempt soon.

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Scott Murdaugh ResultsCopywriting.com War Room Member Join Date: Feb 2007 Location: San Diego, Ca Posts: 916 Thanks: 296 Thanked 600 Times in 218 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Re: Peugot Make A New Interactive Advertisement. I think it sucks. They give no reason why I should give them my number, except that it'll "only be used for the test"... How do I know that part of the test isn't a hard sales pitch from some telemarketer? Also, I stared at the page for a good 30 seconds before anything happened... If I wasn't trying to figure the ad out I'd have bounced long before they even pitched me. And I have no idea what it is except "multi-tasking training". Who's it for? How do I know if it can help me? I think the ad is bad on about every level. -Scott
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