[WTH] Expert long salespage copywriter

[nossie]

Hello

I don't know if this is the right section, else move it to another.

I'm looking for an expert & experienced copywriter who want to totally remake the salespage from scratch to improve it to a killer salespage that will increase conversionrate bigtime:

Automatic Social Bookmarking Software - BookmarkWIZ

The copy+layout this is on the page now doesn't convert good enough.

The only thing that will stay the same is the webdesign, and the videos must still be used.

If you are not experienced with bookmarkwiz, This product is a piece of software targeted to internet marketers to increase there visibility on the web by using social bookmarking. It will be great If you allready have experience in the "SEO" and "Linkbuilding" markets or internet marketing in general.

This salespage must really standout from my competitors.

Also I need an special affiliate page to be created to attract affilaites for my product.

what i need in total is:

- long copy killer salespage content created from scratch
- affiliate page to attract new affiiates
- email campaign for people that opt-in on my salespage
- email campaign people can use if they are my affiliate
- possible some new graphics designed (buttons) if needed.

It would be a big bonus if you know html + html formatting and know how to do everything yourself, then I will just give you the FTP login to my empty webpage and you can do everything needed.

I only need native english/american speaking peolpe who have much experience with salespage writing and can show this to me. It is required to research this product carefully to create the best converting salespage possible for my product.

My budget is around $500-$1250 for this project, it will depend on your skill level. Please tell me your experience in PM and convince me how you can help me with this project.

Looking forward for some reply's, Beginner's please do not waste my time.

[David Raybould]

Hey nossie,

Good job on giving out a lot of information
to go on, it'll help you get more takers.

A word of warning - you're not going to
get an expert copywriter for the budget
you stated.

Experts are expensive, and rightly so;
they make their clients millions of dollars.

Just wanted to let you know.

Good luck with it.

-David Raybould

[David Raybould]

Sorry.

Although, I'm not, really

[David Babineau]

I know Scott Murdaugh has had success writing for this niche, so you might want to contact him (although you'd have to increase your budget...)

Cheers,
David

[nossie]

Thanks for all the reply's guys.

Yeah I understand I cannot get the best of the best for $1250

Still I know there are some skilled copywriters out here that are willing to help me out

[ramohr]

I read your ad it's good but it confusing. I get lost at the beginning.

I would statr out with something like this...

It's no secret that Social Media is taking the Internet by storm...
Would you like to use it to grow your online business by leap and bounds.
Would you like to drive more buyers to your website? But you don't know where to start

Good news...For most Website owners Social Marketing is confusing they don't know how to turn it into immediate income...

First and foremost I don't know anything about your subject and how it can make me money... in your copy you assume I do when I don't...Explain a little more about what it is and how it can help by business more clearly. And next target it to website owners
who want to take their business to the next level.

That's my take on your website.

[nossie]

@ramohr

I know this copy is not effective enough.. thats why I need some pro to remake it for me

[Chris Ramsey]

Hey Nossie,

I've sent you a PM.

The first video is done very well. Whomever you decide to hire should definitely keep that video in at some point of the letter.

[ramohr]

The reason I sent those suggestions to you was because I don't think you need a total make over you need a touch up something you can probably do yourself and save your self some money.

There's alot you have done right. I just think if you do a little more educating on the subject at hand...and less hype stuff you will see a different in conversions.

Answer this question clearly why shoudl I buy your bookmark service over someone elses
and when I buy your service what will it really do for my business and what do I get for my money. And lastly, this is important...why is using the software better than manual.

[Asher]

Hello nossie,

I know this isn't what you're looking for
but you're leaking traffic RIGHT IN THE
BEGINNING!

In the YouTube video you're using, you
have to at least stop the video from
showing related videos when it ends.

It'll distract people from staying at your
page to read the copy.

You can go on over to YouTube, click
on the "customize" button and UNCHECK
the box which states "include related videos"

The code will then change... which you
can use to stick onto your site.

This will then stop the video and only show
"Replay Video" at the end instead of
showing a whole bunch of other videos.

Asher