event for Haiti, need some insight...

bvdeguire · 01-20-2010, 10:24 PM

Hello Everyone

Thank you for reading. I need some imput. I am putting on an event that is to help the Haitian people. It is first to get my name out there as a speaker and to help raise funds for Haiti. I don't have a website yet. I was looking at posting this onto Kijiji and Craiglist. Because I don't have a website yet I was going to get the people to take action by them emailing me then I would email them a link to the website. 50% for the sales will go to the Haiti.

My ad read:

ATTENTION FIRST TIME REAL ESTATE INVESTORS

*Would you like to Discover the ways of how the Wealthy invest?
*Would you like to have positive cash flow from many properties that you will own?

Upcoming Seminar Will Show you how to invest in Real Estate. Without your own Money…My name is Brett Deguire. When I first started to invest I didn’t have any money…

*You will also Discover the 5 Steps to Creating Permanent Wealth
*Be able to find properties 11% to 42% below market value

*Why Should you wait to have all the good deals pass you by?
*Why should you wait an extra year to make $50,000 / $75,000 / $225,000 part-time???

When you come out to our event you will Discover all of the above and more…

We are doing this event to help more people to build more Wealth but also to help the Haitian people. This event is normally $197 but we are having a special. One thing is that we got the room at an affordable price and second is that I want more people to come out to support us. So you will Discover How to do your first Real Estate Deals and be able to help out the Haitian people.

If you come alone your Tuition is $37

For Couples / Partner’s your Tuition is $57.

This event is limited to First 46 people. After that we are closing down the Registration.

The Event will be held on: February 6, 2010
Time: 9am to 2pm

Address: Downtown Toronto

Mr. Enthusiastic · 01-20-2010, 10:50 PM

Brett, you can use blogger.com or ning.com to create a free basic blog where you can keep people updated. I'd also create a new Twitter account, and if you're already on Facebook or Myspace, add a section about your event. Good luck with your event!

Chris

P.S. In the U.S., you'd need to give a clear breakdown of how much of the money is for charity. I don't know Canadian law but it couldn't hurt to list that specifically with each of the prices.

JaiJay · 01-21-2010, 05:43 AM

Why are certain words capitalised in the middle of a sentence? This is not necessary and doesn't flow as well as it could. With a few small tweaks this could be very good

bvdeguire · 01-21-2010, 07:34 AM

Hello Mr. Enthusiastic

I just wanted to thank you for making a comment about the %amount of the donation. Yes, I will have to get a blog going and set up a ning account as well.

To Jaijay

Thank you as well. YOu are right it is a little hare do follow I will take uncapitalise a lot of the words.

01-20-2010, 10:24 PM	#1
bvdeguire Warrior Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 3 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	event for Haiti, need some insight... Hello Everyone Thank you for reading. I need some imput. I am putting on an event that is to help the Haitian people. It is first to get my name out there as a speaker and to help raise funds for Haiti. I don't have a website yet. I was looking at posting this onto Kijiji and Craiglist. Because I don't have a website yet I was going to get the people to take action by them emailing me then I would email them a link to the website. 50% for the sales will go to the Haiti. My ad read: ATTENTION FIRST TIME REAL ESTATE INVESTORS Would you like to Discover the ways of how the Wealthy invest? Would you like to have positive cash flow from many properties that you will own? Upcoming Seminar Will Show you how to invest in Real Estate. Without your own Money…My name is Brett Deguire. When I first started to invest I didn’t have any money… You will also Discover the 5 Steps to Creating Permanent Wealth Be able to find properties 11% to 42% below market value Why Should you wait to have all the good deals pass you by? Why should you wait an extra year to make $50,000 / $75,000 / $225,000 part-time??? When you come out to our event you will Discover all of the above and more… We are doing this event to help more people to build more Wealth but also to help the Haitian people. This event is normally $197 but we are having a special. One thing is that we got the room at an affordable price and second is that I want more people to come out to support us. So you will Discover How to do your first Real Estate Deals and be able to help out the Haitian people. If you come alone your Tuition is $37 For Couples / Partner’s your Tuition is $57. This event is limited to First 46 people. After that we are closing down the Registration. The Event will be held on: February 6, 2010 Time: 9am to 2pm Address: Downtown Toronto

01-20-2010, 10:50 PM	#2
Mr. Enthusiastic Enthusiastic Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Nov 2009 Posts: 815 Blog Entries: 4 Thanks: 222 Thanked 224 Times in 170 Posts	Re: event for Haiti, need some insight... Brett, you can use blogger.com or ning.com to create a free basic blog where you can keep people updated. I'd also create a new Twitter account, and if you're already on Facebook or Myspace, add a section about your event. Good luck with your event! Chris P.S. In the U.S., you'd need to give a clear breakdown of how much of the money is for charity. I don't know Canadian law but it couldn't hurt to list that specifically with each of the prices.

01-21-2010, 05:43 AM	#3
JaiJay HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Jan 2010 Posts: 92 Thanks: 11 Thanked 5 Times in 5 Posts	Re: event for Haiti, need some insight... Why are certain words capitalised in the middle of a sentence? This is not necessary and doesn't flow as well as it could. With a few small tweaks this could be very good

01-21-2010, 07:34 AM	#4
bvdeguire Warrior Member Join Date: Sep 2009 Posts: 3 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts	Re: event for Haiti, need some insight... Hello Mr. Enthusiastic I just wanted to thank you for making a comment about the %amount of the donation. Yes, I will have to get a blog going and set up a ning account as well. To Jaijay Thank you as well. YOu are right it is a little hare do follow I will take uncapitalise a lot of the words.