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| Create More Value War Room Member Join Date: Nov 2006 Location: Small World
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Guys, If you look at Jon Ledger's copy such as: ...you will notice these salesletters are not very long. And they don't go deep into all the covert copy tactics. Though I don't know his conversion rates, I believe they should be better than average. The salesletter does a good job in explaining the product through the video together with a few supporting paragraphs and bullets which are pretty decently written. The most compelling part is his "proof" component as he has tons of testimonials. And they serve as a form of "story-telling" too. It's this very bit that got me sold. It makes the product very credible and believable. To be fair, Jon Ledger has a solid reputation too. Of course, there is always room for improvement as with most copy out there. I think if we are looking at "launch fast, tweak later" philosophy that John Reese always advocate, Jon Ledger's formula seems pretty good for quick generation of decent salescopy. That said, I do recognize it takes time to gather testimonials. You can do it quite fast if you got a substantial list or affiliate base though. What do you think? Jag |
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Dear Jag, Best way I have found is to offer the product for FREE to people for review. That is an easy way to get tons of testimonials and then you can select the ones that most closely fit your story. Good luck with your copy. Jennie Heckel |
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| Matthew James O'Connor War Room Member Join Date: May 2005 Location: Darkest Lincolnshire, UK
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As you say Jag, Jon has a solid reputation which can only help. But with his kind of software, all his prospects want to see is the video of how it works and what it can do. Then the testimonials (even if they've been given in exchange for a "beta" test of the software) clinch the deal. Sometimes you don't need reams of copy when the product speaks for itself. |
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| Warrior Copywriter War Room Member Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Michigan
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Jon relies heavily on his in-house letters for many of his promotions. These folks don't need the full-monty on a salesletter. Plus, behind the scenes, Jon does a fair amount of rapport and proof building via his emails and blog posts. Stan |
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Yep, his rapport with his subscribers definitely help. Sometimes, the overwhelming "proof" element (specific detailed testimonials) is enough to make a copy compelling without it being too long drawn. Jag |
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