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02-23-2010, 01:10 AM
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| WSORebate.com War Room Member  Join Date: Nov 2008 Location: Selangor, MALAYSIA
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|  Can anybody view my salesletter.
Hello all, can anybody review my salesletter. Can that salesletter convert? Here the URL : How To Start Your Own Scrapbooking Business Note : the order button is not working yet. I really need some advice from experts out there. This is my 2 nd attempt to sell my own product online, but still afraid. |
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02-23-2010, 01:32 AM
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| Fingers of Fury War Room Member  Join Date: Oct 2005 Location: Miami, Florida, USA.
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|  Re: Can anybody view my salesletter. Quote:
That block of text at the beginning will kill you dead before anyone reads a single word. Seriously, visitors will just bail out upon encountering that intimidating wall of words. Break the text up and bring in your margins 20-30 pixels on the left and right side. Not even gonna comment on the copy yet. The layout needs immediate attention because no one will ever get to the "reading" part as is. : ) Brian | |
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02-23-2010, 02:28 AM
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| HyperActive Warrior War Room Member  Join Date: Nov 2008
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| Re: Can anybody view my salesletter.
You're up against one of the best in the business Linda. I'd seriously consider signing up as an affiliate. The sales letter is worth more to your business than your actual product in most cases, so getting access to this letter might be a better investment than your own book. How To Make Money With Scrapbooking I know this site does about $15k a month with very little promotion. Hugh |
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02-23-2010, 04:37 AM
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| Re: Can anybody view my salesletter.
You've been given some good advice Raja. A good sales letter will make all the difference to your success. You may want to consider hiring someone to write your sales letter for you. However, if you are not in a position to do that, then please spend some time looking at great sales letters. Once you have a good understanding of what makes a sales letter great, apply what you have learned and rewrite yours. Good luck. |
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