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Old 03-19-2010, 11:43 AM   #1
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Default Need Help with the head lines for my ads

Hi,

I am organizing a tele-seminar/ webinar event with 6 Top Internet Marketers. You can view the details about the event at http://www.InfoSeminarsClub.com

I need some help with the Head lines that I can use for my WSO and also for classified ads and blog posts.

Can anyone recommend any good catchy headlines that I can use to promote my event?

I would also like to get help with nice subject lines for sending out emails... I am paying some hefty amount to promote the event. So I am looking for some really catchy email subject lines that will get good click through's

I can pay for this help . I already paid a nice amount for my copy on my main event page.

ALSO.. my OTO/ upsell offer page info is crappy for now. You can find it here.
Info Seminars Club

Could you please give some suggestions on this...

Any help is appreciated.

Thanks
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Old 03-19-2010, 01:13 PM   #2
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Old 03-19-2010, 05:42 PM   #3
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I can pay for this help . I already paid a nice amount for my copy on my main event page.
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Old 04-18-2010, 09:27 AM   #4
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Greatbizideas- just a follow up... were you ever able to put this to use?


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It's late and I'm tired, so just a quick tip:

Read out loud your main sales page. See how it sounds to you.

I think you could tighten it up quite a bit and make it flow easier.

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