I NEED a slogan for my retail store

tmtech · 04-26-2010, 01:28 AM

Hello,

I am desperately looking for a good slogan for my retail pet supplies store. I will gladly pay any copywriter a quick $25 to come up with a good slogan for me.

I like PetSmarts slogan. They say: "We love to see happy, healthy pets"

I'm looking for something similar but different...

Please let me know if you have any suggestions.

Thanks.

Manfred Ekblad · 04-26-2010, 01:45 AM

Pets were born to be happy

Healthy pets are happy pets
Happy pets are healthy pets

Happy pets - happy owners

tmtech · 04-26-2010, 01:53 AM

Thanks for your comments. Something is just not clicking for me yet. No offense at all guys.

Manfred Ekblad · 04-26-2010, 02:07 AM

Your pet's health and happiness is our reward

Healthy, happy pets - we love 'em!
Happy, healthy pets - we love 'em!

We are happy when your pets are

Happy, healthy pets is what we love
Happy, healthy pets - that is what we love

Happy, healthy pets makes us smile

None taken... thx for some Monday afternoon challenge

thenextcameron · 04-26-2010, 02:41 AM

" For Your Healthy Pets "

" Because We Care Your Pets "

" Your Pet is Our Care "

" Pet's Favorite "

" For Healthy and Happy Pets Only "

" Best Choice for Happy Pets "

RickDuris · 04-26-2010, 06:55 AM

Hi tmtech,

What you're basically asking is to pull a rabbit out of our collective hat with no input or data.

Three (serious) questions:

1. What makes your pet supplies store different, better or unique?

2. What are the slogans for your other local competitors. In other words, you want to differentiate yourself from them, yes?

3. Tell us a little bit about your business. How you got started. What your hopes and dreams are for it and what your commitment is to your customers and their pets. Open up and share. Give us something to work with.

Think hard, do the research and share with us and then we'll be happy to contribute to you. And if I win, you can donate the $25 to your local animal shelter.

- Rick Duris

ARSuarez · 04-26-2010, 06:58 AM

Hey TM,

Coming up with a quick slogan without knowing much else
about your store is tough.

For example:

What is your USP?

If you have a fully functional dog/pet socialization area... or whatever...
you could swipe from Chuck E. Cheese: "Where a pet can be a pet."

To me, a slogan is just a brief statement of your unique selling point.

Think of FedEx: "The world on time." Originally, "When it absolutely has to be there tomorrow."

Decide what is unique about your store. Why should I go there vs another pet retailer?

Heck, think of this: "TM's Pet Supply: Guaranteed To Keep Your Pet Healthy/Happy/From peeing on the carpet" etc.

Anyway, I'm in a bit of a rush, but I hope you get some value out of this.

Best,

Angel

ARSuarez · 04-26-2010, 06:59 AM

I should've known Rick would beat me to it.

RickDuris · 04-26-2010, 07:13 AM

HI ARSuarez,

Your USP insights were on the money.

- Rick Duris

dorothydot · 04-26-2010, 07:22 AM

Happy Pet = Happy Owner
Happy and Healthy Pets
Love Your Pet Happy
Rick's Store: Where Pets Love to Visit
Paws, Wings and Claws - Everything Your Pet Needs

Feel free to mix and match,
Dot

seach4s · 04-26-2010, 07:24 AM

Your Pets are your life... live life to the max

seach4s · 04-26-2010, 07:25 AM

Dont Worry your Pets Happy :-)

Laura B · 04-26-2010, 07:46 AM

I'd want to know more about what sets you apart, too, but in the meantime, here are a couple off the top of my head:

Because pets are family.

Pets are people, too!

People need pets, and pets need us. (as in, Pets need Rick's Pet Supplies)

travlinguy · 04-26-2010, 08:11 AM

Providing you don't cater exclusively to reptiles or birds, try this:

We Keep Your Kitty Purring & Your Pup's Tail Wagging...

Ken_Caudill · 04-26-2010, 10:17 AM

We're There If You Care
Your Pet Pampering Headquarters
Reigning Cats and Dogs
Pet Love to Go
Your Pet Care Experts

Ross Bowring · 04-26-2010, 10:35 AM

Where Heavy Pettin' Happens...

FredJones · 04-26-2010, 10:56 AM

Enjoy pettin'

For your family

For your family's better half

Your pet - your life

Alex Cohen · 04-26-2010, 12:47 PM

"People suck, pets don't".

Or you could swipe the old favorite, "Corns gone in 5 days or money back" -

"Pets happy in 5 days or money back"

Just funning.

Alex

Mr. Subtle · 04-26-2010, 01:04 PM

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tmtech · 04-26-2010, 02:11 PM

Thanks everyone for your suggestions. Maybe you are correct in that I do need to think things through a bit more. I will get back to your shortly.

fasteasysuccess · 04-26-2010, 07:19 PM

Definitely agree with the make sure you even know your usp first.

What makes you special?-why they should come to you?-whats the benefit?

Then state it in a catching way and try to make it no longer than sentance or two.

Jaked · 04-26-2010, 07:42 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Alex Cohen

"People suck, pets don't".

Lol, I think this one wins ^

04-26-2010, 01:28 AM	#1
tmtech Tim OBrien Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Las Vegas, NV Posts: 36 Thanks: 24 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	I NEED a slogan for my retail store Hello, I am desperately looking for a good slogan for my retail pet supplies store. I will gladly pay any copywriter a quick $25 to come up with a good slogan for me. I like PetSmarts slogan. They say: "We love to see happy, healthy pets" I'm looking for something similar but different... Please let me know if you have any suggestions. Thanks.

04-26-2010, 01:45 AM	#2
Manfred Ekblad HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Bandung, Indonesia Posts: 279 Thanks: 85 Thanked 189 Times in 52 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Re: I NEED a slogan for my retail store Pets were born to be happy Healthy pets are happy pets Happy pets are healthy pets Happy pets - happy owners
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04-26-2010, 01:53 AM	#3
tmtech Tim OBrien Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Las Vegas, NV Posts: 36 Thanks: 24 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: I NEED a slogan for my retail store Thanks for your comments. Something is just not clicking for me yet. No offense at all guys.

04-26-2010, 02:07 AM	#4
Manfred Ekblad HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Mar 2009 Location: Bandung, Indonesia Posts: 279 Thanks: 85 Thanked 189 Times in 52 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Re: I NEED a slogan for my retail store Your pet's health and happiness is our reward Healthy, happy pets - we love 'em! Happy, healthy pets - we love 'em! We are happy when your pets are Happy, healthy pets is what we love Happy, healthy pets - that is what we love Happy, healthy pets makes us smile None taken... thx for some Monday afternoon challenge
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04-26-2010, 02:41 AM	#5
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04-26-2010, 06:55 AM	#6
RickDuris Rick Duris CopyRanger.com War Room Member Join Date: Dec 2009 Location: Laguna Beach, CA Posts: 1,180 Thanks: 513 Thanked 1,431 Times in 518 Posts Social Networking Contact Info	Re: I NEED a slogan for my retail store Hi tmtech, What you're basically asking is to pull a rabbit out of our collective hat with no input or data. Three (serious) questions: 1. What makes your pet supplies store different, better or unique? 2. What are the slogans for your other local competitors. In other words, you want to differentiate yourself from them, yes? 3. Tell us a little bit about your business. How you got started. What your hopes and dreams are for it and what your commitment is to your customers and their pets. Open up and share. Give us something to work with. Think hard, do the research and share with us and then we'll be happy to contribute to you. And if I win, you can donate the $25 to your local animal shelter. - Rick Duris
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04-26-2010, 06:58 AM	#7
ARSuarez HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Port Saint Lucie, FL Posts: 403 Blog Entries: 4 Thanks: 413 Thanked 213 Times in 129 Posts	Re: I NEED a slogan for my retail store Hey TM, Coming up with a quick slogan without knowing much else about your store is tough. For example: What is your USP? If you have a fully functional dog/pet socialization area... or whatever... you could swipe from Chuck E. Cheese: "Where a pet can be a pet." To me, a slogan is just a brief statement of your unique selling point. Think of FedEx: "The world on time." Originally, "When it absolutely has to be there tomorrow." Decide what is unique about your store. Why should I go there vs another pet retailer? Heck, think of this: "TM's Pet Supply: Guaranteed To Keep Your Pet Healthy/Happy/From peeing on the carpet" etc. Anyway, I'm in a bit of a rush, but I hope you get some value out of this. Best, Angel

04-26-2010, 06:59 AM	#8
ARSuarez HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Feb 2009 Location: Port Saint Lucie, FL Posts: 403 Blog Entries: 4 Thanks: 413 Thanked 213 Times in 129 Posts	Re: I NEED a slogan for my retail store I should've known Rick would beat me to it.

04-26-2010, 07:13 AM	#9
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04-26-2010, 07:22 AM	#10
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04-26-2010, 02:11 PM	#20
tmtech Tim OBrien Join Date: Oct 2009 Location: Las Vegas, NV Posts: 36 Thanks: 24 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: I NEED a slogan for my retail store Thanks everyone for your suggestions. Maybe you are correct in that I do need to think things through a bit more. I will get back to your shortly.

04-26-2010, 07:19 PM	#21
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