Your Critical Feedback Appreciated

Sparklesperson · 10-28-2008, 08:12 AM

Hi all,

I'm setting up a JV giveaway event in a none-IM niche, and would like some feedback on the pages as I get them done.

The first page is located here

This is not the live site, and as of this morning, this is the only page I've worked on. I'll update what pages I've written as we go along.

I'll update the graphics a little later today as some parts still have watermarks on them right now.

Thanks so much - you've no idea how much this means to me!

JonathanBoettcher · 10-29-2008, 06:41 PM

It looks a little broken right now... is this still live?

I like the idea of getting both offers for $75, though making a $97 product worth $47, right beside a $296 product also for $47 seems odd to me... does weird things with people's mind as they try to assign value in their head.

/2 cents

Sparklesperson · 10-29-2008, 07:01 PM

It's not live yet. I've had another individual tell me it was broken, although when I tested, it worked. I don't know why it's broken.

I know, the oops page needs reworked.

Were there any thoughts on the copy on that page?

rwil02 · 10-29-2008, 07:59 PM

The Oops page problem is using relative URLS for the images, etc.
Should be root relative instead

e.g.

use /_borders/header.jpg instead of _borders/header.jpg

can't really comment on anything else as i can't see it

TianYan · 10-29-2008, 08:29 PM

Still broken on when I saw it.
I'll take a look for you when it is up again.

Be Well,
- Tian Yan

cfloyd · 10-30-2008, 11:47 AM

I would love to comment on your page but it still seems un-operational!

Good Luck-Cindy

10-28-2008, 08:12 AM	#1
Sparklesperson HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Grand Rapids, MN, USA. Posts: 107 Thanks: 65 Thanked 9 Times in 9 Posts Social Networking	Your Critical Feedback Appreciated Hi all, I'm setting up a JV giveaway event in a none-IM niche, and would like some feedback on the pages as I get them done. The first page is located here This is not the live site, and as of this morning, this is the only page I've worked on. I'll update what pages I've written as we go along. I'll update the graphics a little later today as some parts still have watermarks on them right now. Thanks so much - you've no idea how much this means to me!
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10-29-2008, 07:01 PM	#3
Sparklesperson HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Grand Rapids, MN, USA. Posts: 107 Thanks: 65 Thanked 9 Times in 9 Posts Social Networking	Re: Your Critical Feedback Appreciated It's not live yet. I've had another individual tell me it was broken, although when I tested, it worked. I don't know why it's broken. I know, the oops page needs reworked. Were there any thoughts on the copy on that page?
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10-29-2008, 07:59 PM	#4
rwil02 HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: May 2005 Location: Auckland, New Zealand. Posts: 241 Thanks: 0 Thanked 13 Times in 12 Posts Social Networking	Re: Your Critical Feedback Appreciated The Oops page problem is using relative URLS for the images, etc. Should be root relative instead e.g. use /_borders/header.jpg instead of _borders/header.jpg can't really comment on anything else as i can't see it
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TianYan Active Warrior Join Date: Sep 2007 Location: Petaling Jaya, Malaysia Posts: 45 Thanks: 2 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Social Networking Contact Info	Re: Your Critical Feedback Appreciated Still broken on when I saw it. I'll take a look for you when it is up again. Be Well, - Tian Yan
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10-30-2008, 11:47 AM	#6
cfloyd Warrior Member Join Date: Mar 2008 Location: , , USA. Posts: 23 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: Your Critical Feedback Appreciated I would love to comment on your page but it still seems un-operational! Good Luck-Cindy
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