Review Copy is offered for NEW Copywriting Video Course...

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Hi,

I've just launched a brand-new Online Copywriting video course
(it was created with Camtasia 5.0) containing 21 multimedia
tutorials and its sales letter is here:

How to Become an Online Copywriting Professional @ Profits.CC

Yep! There are no testimonials whatsoever, because
the video course has just been launched today.

I'd appreciate if copywriters could offer a Critique for the
whole course in whatever format you choose (text, audio, or video...).

If you are interested in watching the 21 video tutorials and offer
a Critique, please send me an email to
armandobsilva [at] gmail.com and I'll send you the Review Copy links at once.

By the way, you don't need to download anything.
These are Flash movies, and you can simply watch them online,
if you have a broadband connection.

Thanks for your interest.

Armando
Publisher - ►► Internet Business Ideas for a Profitable Online Business.

P.S. - Profits.CC Affiliate Program for this copywriting
video course pays a 70% commission via ClickBank, here:
---> ►► Affiliate Marketing Resources Toolbox @ Profits.CC

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What if you already know how to do all this?

Well, lots of people don't and you can pick up the
Master Resell Rights to this video package as well,
so you could earn profits while helping others.

Click here: How to Become an Online Copywriting Professional Video Course

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I just want to thank Warrior Forum members for all the
favorable reviews that this new Copywriting Video Course
is getting, and in particular Jim Somchai, from
fatlossbookreports.com and Scott Williams from
KillerReviewTemplates.com

Please read my signature file... all other 5 video courses
are currently offering a Review Copy for any
Warrior Forum member with a site that wishes to get
free exposure via the sales page, in exchange for an
honest, sincere testimonial.

[brucerby]

Armando, with respect, I'm borrowing a famous phase:
"COPYWRITER, HEAL THYSELF"....

I barely read 10% of your sales letter about a course on How To Write Sales Letters. These are just a few of the things I stumbled on:

"They Always Say That The Pen Is Mightier Than The Sword"
(who is they? ...this phrase is meaningless)

"Who Else Wants To Crank Out Profit-Pulling Letters And See Their Conversion Rates Shoot Through The Roof Like A Rocket... Starting Today!"
(You begin with the most OVERUSED Headline phrase ever)
(.....rates shoot thru THE ROOF LIKE A ROCKET??? - bad metaphor - think about it)

"Become Your Own Instant Expert At Writing Master Pieces That Sell... And Convert Twice Or Triple As Many Customers!"
(Master Pieces should be ONE WORD) (Then it should read, "convert TWO OR THREE TIMES)

Direct Response Sales Copies are FAR from dead, contrary to what many people might have you believed.
(COPIES??? do you mean COPY?) (BELIEVED??? do you mean BELIEVE?)

...and I am barely into the first paragraph of text! I could go on and on actually. English may not be the first language here so I understand, but to offer a copywriting course with ad copy that hasn't been
proofed does NOT reflect well on your product.

...and the overall copywriting style is very amateurish anyway, imo. Sorry.
_______
Bruce

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Thanks, Bruce, for your honest criticism.

Actually, I've already incorporated your comments in my sales letter:

How to Become an Online Copywriting Professional Video Course

But you must realize that I already had a few sales, NO refund
requests (yet) and I already have 2 (two) powerful, authentic testimonials.

Bruce, I'd like to offer you a Review Copy... I like your
constructive criticism. Interested?