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Armando B. Silva
Join Date: Oct 2002
Location: Lisbon, Portugal.
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Hi,
I've just launched a brand-new Online Copywriting video course (it was created with Camtasia 5.0) containing 21 multimedia tutorials and its sales letter is here: How to Become an Online Copywriting Professional @ Profits.CC Yep! There are no testimonials whatsoever, because the video course has just been launched today. I'd appreciate if copywriters could offer a Critique for the whole course in whatever format you choose (text, audio, or video...). If you are interested in watching the 21 video tutorials and offer a Critique, please send me an email to armandobsilva [at] gmail.com and I'll send you the Review Copy links at once. By the way, you don't need to download anything. These are Flash movies, and you can simply watch them online, if you have a broadband connection. Thanks for your interest. Armando Publisher - ►► Internet Business Ideas for a Profitable Online Business. P.S. - Profits.CC Affiliate Program for this copywriting video course pays a 70% commission via ClickBank, here: ---> ►► Affiliate Marketing Resources Toolbox @ Profits.CC |
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Armando B. Silva, Editor / Publisher - Profitable Internet Business Ideas Blog @ Profits.CC | Affiliate Program pays a whopping 70% commission via ClickBank | Powerful Freebies | Expert Blogging Videos | Online Copywriting Pro Videos | Adobe Photoshop For Newbies Videos | Traffic Marketing Videos | eBay Profits Videos | Resale Rights Videos
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Armando B. Silva
Join Date: Oct 2002
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What if you already know how to do all this?
Well, lots of people don't and you can pick up the Master Resell Rights to this video package as well, so you could earn profits while helping others. Click here: How to Become an Online Copywriting Professional Video Course |
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Armando B. Silva, Editor / Publisher - Profitable Internet Business Ideas Blog @ Profits.CC | Affiliate Program pays a whopping 70% commission via ClickBank | Powerful Freebies | Expert Blogging Videos | Online Copywriting Pro Videos | Adobe Photoshop For Newbies Videos | Traffic Marketing Videos | eBay Profits Videos | Resale Rights Videos
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Armando B. Silva
Join Date: Oct 2002
Location: Lisbon, Portugal.
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I just want to thank Warrior Forum members for all the
favorable reviews that this new Copywriting Video Course is getting, and in particular Jim Somchai, from fatlossbookreports.com and Scott Williams from KillerReviewTemplates.com Please read my signature file... all other 5 video courses are currently offering a Review Copy for any Warrior Forum member with a site that wishes to get free exposure via the sales page, in exchange for an honest, sincere testimonial. |
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Armando B. Silva, Editor / Publisher - Profitable Internet Business Ideas Blog @ Profits.CC | Affiliate Program pays a whopping 70% commission via ClickBank | Powerful Freebies | Expert Blogging Videos | Online Copywriting Pro Videos | Adobe Photoshop For Newbies Videos | Traffic Marketing Videos | eBay Profits Videos | Resale Rights Videos
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Join Date: Mar 2005
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Armando, with respect, I'm borrowing a famous phase:
"COPYWRITER, HEAL THYSELF".... I barely read 10% of your sales letter about a course on How To Write Sales Letters. These are just a few of the things I stumbled on: "They Always Say That The Pen Is Mightier Than The Sword" (who is they? ...this phrase is meaningless) "Who Else Wants To Crank Out Profit-Pulling Letters And See Their Conversion Rates Shoot Through The Roof Like A Rocket... Starting Today!" (You begin with the most OVERUSED Headline phrase ever) (.....rates shoot thru THE ROOF LIKE A ROCKET??? - bad metaphor - think about it) "Become Your Own Instant Expert At Writing Master Pieces That Sell... And Convert Twice Or Triple As Many Customers!" (Master Pieces should be ONE WORD) (Then it should read, "convert TWO OR THREE TIMES) Direct Response Sales Copies are FAR from dead, contrary to what many people might have you believed. (COPIES??? do you mean COPY?) (BELIEVED??? do you mean BELIEVE?) ...and I am barely into the first paragraph of text! I could go on and on actually. English may not be the first language here so I understand, but to offer a copywriting course with ad copy that hasn't been proofed does NOT reflect well on your product. ...and the overall copywriting style is very amateurish anyway, imo. Sorry. _______ Bruce |
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Armando B. Silva
Join Date: Oct 2002
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Thanks, Bruce, for your honest criticism.
Actually, I've already incorporated your comments in my sales letter: How to Become an Online Copywriting Professional Video Course But you must realize that I already had a few sales, NO refund requests (yet) and I already have 2 (two) powerful, authentic testimonials. Bruce, I'd like to offer you a Review Copy... I like your constructive criticism. Interested? |
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Armando B. Silva, Editor / Publisher - Profitable Internet Business Ideas Blog @ Profits.CC | Affiliate Program pays a whopping 70% commission via ClickBank | Powerful Freebies | Expert Blogging Videos | Online Copywriting Pro Videos | Adobe Photoshop For Newbies Videos | Traffic Marketing Videos | eBay Profits Videos | Resale Rights Videos
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