Need help finding a Sales Pitch

amrrashad · 01-18-2011, 05:16 AM

Greetings fellow Warriors,

I have an offer that I'd like to promote but I'm having trouble finding a sales pitch for it. It's a system designed by 2 guys who have a wealth of experience in the stock market (29 years of professional experience), and they have great results to show for it. However, compared to what people are showing, I can't find a strong headline to pull people in

- The basic idea is: rather than buying options by placing puts or calls like everyone does, they Sell options

The facts:
- Their techniques grow your portfolio by 5 - 8% a month, at least
- Trades even yield 30 - 50%
- They don't just give you trade tips, their trades are specifically tailored to reduce risk, and boost the probability of a profitable trade
- They basically do not focus on home-runs, just consistent singles

Following your previous advice (found using the forums's Excellent Search

), I tried looking for sales pitches for similar products on ClickBank, nothing feels right.

My feeling is that this product has real value to it. My problem is that I can't find a way to make it shine

What do you think?

P.S The forum has a wealth of information that I've been going through for 3 days straight, I've learned new things here that I haven't learned in a year! Thank you.

OutOfThisWord · 01-18-2011, 06:39 AM

Attention Stock Market Investors...

Proven Option Sell Techniques Crush The Market By Growing Your Portfolio At Least 5% Monthly

30 Year Experience Investment Team Shows You How

mindcracking · 01-18-2011, 06:45 AM

That's à good start. Maby you can tell them hoe they started out and how they grown THE way they are right now. Talk very enthusiastic and overloading. Create à sence of urgentie that THE preople reading it cant let this offer slip away. There are alot of ebooks Who talk about creating à perfect sales pitch.

Hope this helps for you!

amrrashad · 01-18-2011, 11:13 AM

@OutOfThisWord - Thanks! I'll definitely use this as a base for my headline. Hope you don't mind.

@mindcracking - Thanks. Are these the same ones in the sticky up top? Or is there another list that I missed?

ewenmack · 01-18-2011, 11:48 AM

Hi,

At this link, The Biggest, Most Bad-Ass List of Awesome Marketing Lists...,
scroll down and find the list headed "Financial".

You'll find companies that pay some of the highest fees
to copywriters, therefore you'll see some of the best
sales pitches for that market.

Even better, sign up to their newsletters, no cost,
and you'll get a steady stream of take-it-to-the-bank insights
coming to you, so you don't have to waste time hunting them down.

All the best,
Ewen

amrrashad · 01-23-2011, 05:23 AM

Thanks Ewen,

This is amazing!

247Copywriter · 01-23-2011, 08:08 AM

Rather than using a swipe and deploy of an existing sales letter, you could just save yourself all the time and hassle and invest in one of Vin Montello's students for your copywriting for this particular niche.

Daniel Scott might be the best guy for you here. He's a fellow Warrior and a darn fine fellow to boot. Bloody brilliant at what he does in this and associated markets.

I hope this advice helps you out.

01-18-2011, 05:16 AM	#1
amrrashad Warrior Member Join Date: Jan 2011 Posts: 20 Thanks: 25 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Need help finding a Sales Pitch Greetings fellow Warriors, I have an offer that I'd like to promote but I'm having trouble finding a sales pitch for it. It's a system designed by 2 guys who have a wealth of experience in the stock market (29 years of professional experience), and they have great results to show for it. However, compared to what people are showing, I can't find a strong headline to pull people in - The basic idea is: rather than buying options by placing puts or calls like everyone does, they Sell options The facts: - Their techniques grow your portfolio by 5 - 8% a month, at least - Trades even yield 30 - 50% - They don't just give you trade tips, their trades are specifically tailored to reduce risk, and boost the probability of a profitable trade - They basically do not focus on home-runs, just consistent singles Following your previous advice (found using the forums's Excellent Search ), I tried looking for sales pitches for similar products on ClickBank, nothing feels right. My feeling is that this product has real value to it. My problem is that I can't find a way to make it shine What do you think? P.S The forum has a wealth of information that I've been going through for 3 days straight, I've learned new things here that I haven't learned in a year! Thank you.

01-18-2011, 06:39 AM	#2
OutOfThisWord HyperActive Warrior War Room Member Join Date: Sep 2010 Location: New Orleans Posts: 142 Thanks: 2 Thanked 38 Times in 31 Posts	Re: Need help finding a Sales Pitch Attention Stock Market Investors... Proven Option Sell Techniques Crush The Market By Growing Your Portfolio At Least 5% Monthly 30 Year Experience Investment Team Shows You How

01-18-2011, 06:45 AM	#3
mindcracking Warrior Member Join Date: Aug 2010 Posts: 17 Thanks: 0 Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts	Re: Need help finding a Sales Pitch That's à good start. Maby you can tell them hoe they started out and how they grown THE way they are right now. Talk very enthusiastic and overloading. Create à sence of urgentie that THE preople reading it cant let this offer slip away. There are alot of ebooks Who talk about creating à perfect sales pitch. Hope this helps for you!
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01-18-2011, 11:13 AM	#4
amrrashad Warrior Member Join Date: Jan 2011 Posts: 20 Thanks: 25 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: Need help finding a Sales Pitch @OutOfThisWord - Thanks! I'll definitely use this as a base for my headline. Hope you don't mind. @mindcracking - Thanks. Are these the same ones in the sticky up top? Or is there another list that I missed?

01-18-2011, 11:48 AM	#5
ewenmack Senior Warrior Member War Room Member Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Auckland, New Zealand Posts: 2,092 Thanks: 790 Thanked 1,027 Times in 558 Posts	Re: Need help finding a Sales Pitch Hi, At this link, The Biggest, Most Bad-Ass List of Awesome Marketing Lists..., scroll down and find the list headed "Financial". You'll find companies that pay some of the highest fees to copywriters, therefore you'll see some of the best sales pitches for that market. Even better, sign up to their newsletters, no cost, and you'll get a steady stream of take-it-to-the-bank insights coming to you, so you don't have to waste time hunting them down. All the best, Ewen

01-23-2011, 05:23 AM	#6
amrrashad Warrior Member Join Date: Jan 2011 Posts: 20 Thanks: 25 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post	Re: Need help finding a Sales Pitch Thanks Ewen, This is amazing!

01-23-2011, 08:08 AM	#7
247Copywriter Banned Join Date: Aug 2010 Location: World Travelling Posts: 293 Thanks: 200 Thanked 133 Times in 76 Posts	Re: Need help finding a Sales Pitch Rather than using a swipe and deploy of an existing sales letter, you could just save yourself all the time and hassle and invest in one of Vin Montello's students for your copywriting for this particular niche. Daniel Scott might be the best guy for you here. He's a fellow Warrior and a darn fine fellow to boot. Bloody brilliant at what he does in this and associated markets. I hope this advice helps you out.