Elevator Pitch / Synopsis of offerings

[theturd]

I need help with creating an elevator pitch and or putting into words that are more elegant than I can bring to the table what my product does and why they need it. I am looking for someone who i can just show the product to have give them my mumbling versions of why people need it then have that person find some good stats and help me get a pitch for both online and offline use. something that i could also use in a video on the site even ...... please help if anyone offers this service.... i would love to have an actual phone call about it and not just go back and forth on email so phone communication is key for me i am on the east coast of the US.


Justin

[sethczerepak]

First step, close your eyes and picture your ideal customer and the exact state they'll be in after they've successfully used your product. People don't buy products and services, they buy and result benefits.

I'll subscribe to this thread and wait for your answer.

[theturd]

Originally Posted by sethczerepak

First step, close your eyes and picture your ideal customer and the exact state they'll be in after they've successfully used your product. People don't buy products and services, they buy and result benefits.

I'll subscribe to this thread and wait for your answer.

man my client just had a mess in their pants... j/k
that being said i really don't want to write the thing
i have gotten several PM with a range in estimates like you wouldn't believe
that being said for future PMers I was looking for some sort of either small cash or trade for free account on tweet buddy ..... i feel a barter in the air

[theturd]

well the point is to gain followers in their niche in a targeted manner whether that be by keyword or location or both automatically and to automate the rest of the twitter marlketing with scheduling tweets etc. so they can focus on their core business and this will generate money making leads automatically and take the hassle and headaches out of their hands if that makes sense.

let's put it this way twitter has x amount of active users daily/monthly tweet buddy helps them filter out the noise to users that are important to them and can increase their sales/conversions 10x

man i am bad at words lol

[theturd]

here is what i have so far for my site video..... please HELP!

we've all heard about the power of twitter
and how effective it can be as a marketing tool

but ... as a matter of fact! the majority of people who wanna experience the power of twitter can't harness it.

but WHY ?

for 1 simple reason

untargeted followers

now what if i can show you something that can solve that problem ?

a powerful system that can help you target potential customers and clients who are interested in what you are offering


Introducing, Tweet Buddy!


the tool that will take your twitter marketing to a whole new level!


With tweet buddy you gonna be able to target followers based location and keywords!

stop marketing on twitter with a shotgun and use a laser

Tweet Buddy will increase sales and give you back what you need most... your time

And guess what, the whole system completely automated!

So Tweet Buddy will be working for you even while you are asleep!



ok this is what i got so far please help me with this 60-90 second script i beg for the mercy of good writing

[Joel]

There are 3 types of people who will buy your product/service:
1. have a need
2. have a need -know they have a need
3. have a need -know they have a need - ready to buy

You obviously want #3's!

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"Best" means nothing ... everyone says that!